My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "You thrill me."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from mbagby23
Very nice love story. Like the way you show how the love for another can make someone feel. Sweet and caring. Like it's love at first sight.
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
Very nice love story. Like the way you show how the love for another can make someone feel. Sweet and caring. Like it's love at first sight.
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for this fine review :) Jaq xx
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Welcome.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written the only thing I would do is change its category to romance well done this is beautiful regards Jill
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
Yes my friend this is well written the only thing I would do is change its category to romance well done this is beautiful regards Jill
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thanks Jill, I always forget about that bit. LOL Cheers for keeping me write my friend. :) Jaq xx
Comment from October21
"You are mine, I am yours"- aw! So romantic! You write love poetry amazingly:-)
The ending... So true... Perfection finds a flaws and what's meant to be forever will one day come to an end... Great way to finish the otherwise wonderfully passionate and beautiful piece!!! Ah... Darn! Just have away my last six to Mark for his latest poem... Ah...:-(
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
"You are mine, I am yours"- aw! So romantic! You write love poetry amazingly:-)
The ending... So true... Perfection finds a flaws and what's meant to be forever will one day come to an end... Great way to finish the otherwise wonderfully passionate and beautiful piece!!! Ah... Darn! Just have away my last six to Mark for his latest poem... Ah...:-(
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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No worries your words are more than enough Shenel. thanks you so much, glad you gave them to Mark. :) Jaq xx
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Me too although I wish I saved another LOL!:-) you're welcome Jaq:-)