Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Jaq,

A fabulous message and wisdom needing to be heard.
Great rhythm and rhyme. Strong descriptive lines that pull the reader in. Great job on this one. Right beside you on this one.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen

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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013

Thanks Maureen, the video just prompted me to say something. :) Jaq xx