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Fickle Lady

Winter has many moods.

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Comment from megg_2020
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My sentiments exactly. I really like your poem for this contest. It expressed pretty much all the ways we feel and see from the winter. I love this time of year, and your poem. Good luck in the contest. Blessed Be.

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 Comment Written 11-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for the review and the lovely comments. They are much appreciated.
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Nice rhymes in this, great rhythm, amazing flow. I like how you compare winter to a "fickle lady; confusion is her game. Some days, she (needs an apostrophe, s after she) wild and blustery, and other days she's tame.

"Just when you think you sense the warmth and sunshine of her smile, she turns her frigid back on you and chills you for a while"

"You can't adjust to her mood swings, no use to plan ahead"

"Her snow she scatters everywhere and paints the landscape white. You might enjoy her scenery, but not her chilling bite"

You do a great job keeping with this "fickle lady" theme. Nice work.


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 Comment Written 11-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments. I appreciate you pointing out the spag. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
reply by Flamingbush on 11-Dec-2012
    You're very welcome. Glad to be of help.