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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Writhing Wraiths"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
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Comment from Nebukadneser
I loved it,I loved it I loved it! What an amazing piece of writing. It is so well written and it flows beautifully of the tongue. The picture of the three witches dancing and twirling becomes alive in the readers mind. It reads easily and has a very nice rhythm. Thank you for a poem interwoven with the coming of age of the three women graduating to broom riders.
Well done
You're a star.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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I loved it,I loved it I loved it! What an amazing piece of writing. It is so well written and it flows beautifully of the tongue. The picture of the three witches dancing and twirling becomes alive in the readers mind. It reads easily and has a very nice rhythm. Thank you for a poem interwoven with the coming of age of the three women graduating to broom riders.
Well done
You're a star.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thanks for that stunning and enthusiastic review.
Comment from alexisleech
Your charming poem does indeed conjure up many images which work well with your chosen image at the top of your poem. They sound like three cute witches - not scary at all. Definitely my kind of witch!
Alexis x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Your charming poem does indeed conjure up many images which work well with your chosen image at the top of your poem. They sound like three cute witches - not scary at all. Definitely my kind of witch!
Alexis x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thanks Alexis for the charming review.
Comment from His Grayness
This is highly creative and energetic while still having a meaningful story and guidance. I really enjoyed reading this and was amazed at the forethought the poet used in setting up the future use of the letters needed to comply with the ABCD structure. Great work and many thanks for an enjoyable time! His Grayness
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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This is highly creative and energetic while still having a meaningful story and guidance. I really enjoyed reading this and was amazed at the forethought the poet used in setting up the future use of the letters needed to comply with the ABCD structure. Great work and many thanks for an enjoyable time! His Grayness
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thank for the outstanding review, and the six stars well a wonderful surprise. Thanks again.
Comment from lakeport
Writhing Wraiths indeed. that's a lovely action filled story poem, it reads like something out of a fairy tale,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakeport.
Happy Thanksgiving!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Writhing Wraiths indeed. that's a lovely action filled story poem, it reads like something out of a fairy tale,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Lakeport.
Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Thank you for the visit and input. Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your Abcderian Acrostic from A to Z is superbly written with strong imagery, excellent use of alliteration, great use of metaphor and very good narrative.
You also managed to use very good rhyme and meter.
I enjoyed your lines:
Praying here for the gift to be bequeathed.
Quaking, praying, shaking with a shiver,
Rapping with jungle music all around,
Surrounded by the eerie night time sounds.
To them a question comes from hot thin air,
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your Abcderian Acrostic to other reviewers.
Impressive story telling in Abcderian Acrostic form.
Please have a nice Thanksgiving,
Missy.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Poet,
Your Abcderian Acrostic from A to Z is superbly written with strong imagery, excellent use of alliteration, great use of metaphor and very good narrative.
You also managed to use very good rhyme and meter.
I enjoyed your lines:
Praying here for the gift to be bequeathed.
Quaking, praying, shaking with a shiver,
Rapping with jungle music all around,
Surrounded by the eerie night time sounds.
To them a question comes from hot thin air,
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your Abcderian Acrostic to other reviewers.
Impressive story telling in Abcderian Acrostic form.
Please have a nice Thanksgiving,
Missy.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for this awesome review. I send you a recommendation, but I'm out right now. Remind me next month.
Hope you vote when the time comes
Happy Thanksgiving
Comment from catatrance
Wow! Great picture and a superbly written abecedarian poem. Your imagination is really complex yet simply enthralling! It's really so fascinating, the patience and effort you've put behind creating such a masterpiece. I really wish you the best for winning the contest! Whispering wishes!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Wow! Great picture and a superbly written abecedarian poem. Your imagination is really complex yet simply enthralling! It's really so fascinating, the patience and effort you've put behind creating such a masterpiece. I really wish you the best for winning the contest! Whispering wishes!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2012
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Your word are thrilling as I absorb your wonderful enthusiasm. Thanks for the review. Hope you'll vote when the booth come up.
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Absolutely! Whether you win or lose, for me you've already won!
CAT
Comment from mumsyone
Interesting aebecedarian poem, and a very interesting photo. Clever use of Xena as a name and as the "X" needed for the acrostic.
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Interesting aebecedarian poem, and a very interesting photo. Clever use of Xena as a name and as the "X" needed for the acrostic.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you for this wonderful review. Yes, x's can be quite limiting, although you can see from my other posted works that that doesn't particularly bother me.
Comment from Angels27
Animated still...seems like an apt description. The Abecdarian poem is very lively. The writing conjures up images of witches and forest spirits.. Good contest entry.
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Animated still...seems like an apt description. The Abecdarian poem is very lively. The writing conjures up images of witches and forest spirits.. Good contest entry.
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Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you Angels27 for your incite.