Aiden's Birthday Surprise
A magical Disney treat41 total reviews
Comment from Pen&Ink
Clever and poignant. About the only cartoon character missing might have been Huckleberry Hound, but then maybe I missed him. The rhythm is a bit rough in spots, but who really cares? It's a great poem, and I look forward to reading next year's version.
Ray
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Clever and poignant. About the only cartoon character missing might have been Huckleberry Hound, but then maybe I missed him. The rhythm is a bit rough in spots, but who really cares? It's a great poem, and I look forward to reading next year's version.
Ray
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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No, Huckleberry had a prior engagement that day. There are a few that I didn't include, none intentional. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it!! John
Comment from Cornetist
Well, I'm sure someday, it will come true. Remember to wish upon a star! Nice story...Everything about the first birthday party is special, even if it is only at a local water-park!
Cornetist
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Well, I'm sure someday, it will come true. Remember to wish upon a star! Nice story...Everything about the first birthday party is special, even if it is only at a local water-park!
Cornetist
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you cornetist for reading and commenting on my poem/story. I appreciate your words... John
I see fr your profile you are from Jersey, where. I as well.
Comment from deb552
It's always a pleasure to read an upbeat story, such as this. I'm a kid at heart, so I loved the whole Disney theme, and the way you made each character come alive. You tell a wonderfully creative story with great rhyming and rhythm. The thing that adds to it, is that it was inspired by your granddaughter, and is a gift she'll treasure forever. You have a great contest entry and I wish you the best of luck! your ending is perfecto! deb
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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It's always a pleasure to read an upbeat story, such as this. I'm a kid at heart, so I loved the whole Disney theme, and the way you made each character come alive. You tell a wonderfully creative story with great rhyming and rhythm. The thing that adds to it, is that it was inspired by your granddaughter, and is a gift she'll treasure forever. You have a great contest entry and I wish you the best of luck! your ending is perfecto! deb
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Wow... Thank you deb for that generous six star rating. I take them seriously.,even more I take the word written in your review to heart more so then the sixer (dont forget i will always accept a six)and build confidence in myself to move forward in my goal of getting published one day. Thank you again deb, it all means mucho para me!!! JohnnyD
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you are so welcome! the 6 are were well deserved! you need to believe in yourself because you do have the talent my friend!!!! one day you will get your wish of being published and i want the 1st autographed copy!!!!! deb
Comment from hari anand
Lovely poetry, truly magical hope these kind of dream wishes come true, your garnddaughter very adorable, love the story the poetry.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Lovely poetry, truly magical hope these kind of dream wishes come true, your garnddaughter very adorable, love the story the poetry.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you much Mbabills for reading and your words of encouragement, I appreciate it very much. John
Comment from wordsareus
Although Disney was only a dream, you did such a great job of describing it as if you were truly there. You have a really good imagination.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Although Disney was only a dream, you did such a great job of describing it as if you were truly there. You have a really good imagination.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you very much for stopping to read and share your comments. I truly appreciate it. John
Comment from Simple Reflection
Very cute! It was interesting how you managed to get all of the names of Disney characters woven into the poem. The poem is very whimsical and fun, and the rhymes work well. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Very cute! It was interesting how you managed to get all of the names of Disney characters woven into the poem. The poem is very whimsical and fun, and the rhymes work well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you for reading and commenting, the well wishes and generous review. I appreciate it all very much. John
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi jmdg1954,
It looks as if you are truly blessed with this beautiful grandchild and your wonderful writing ability. A really sweet birthday poem which I'm sure will be repeated next year. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Hi jmdg1954,
It looks as if you are truly blessed with this beautiful grandchild and your wonderful writing ability. A really sweet birthday poem which I'm sure will be repeated next year. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thanks mtnspirit for those wonderful words. A grandchild certainly differs from your own children, my heart melts each time I look at a photo. Thanks for reading my work ... John
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By the way, I meant to wish you the best with this contest. It certainly looks like a winner to me.
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Thank you. That's kind of you.!!
Comment from visionary1234
aah, but perhaps one day the birthday really WILL be at the Disney park, though I doubt you'll have it all to yourselves! What a fun write! good luck in the contest! :) Sharyn
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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aah, but perhaps one day the birthday really WILL be at the Disney park, though I doubt you'll have it all to yourselves! What a fun write! good luck in the contest! :) Sharyn
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you Sharyn for reading and sharing innthrvjoy my granddaughter brings. Just wished I could see her more. Peace, John
Comment from kiwigirl2821
What a little treasure she really is. It doesn't matter that it was not in Disney's theme park. I'm sure she enjoyed herself immensely and was simply happy to be with you. Fabulous entry into this contest. Well done! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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What a little treasure she really is. It doesn't matter that it was not in Disney's theme park. I'm sure she enjoyed herself immensely and was simply happy to be with you. Fabulous entry into this contest. Well done! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you kiwigirl for reading and the positive comments. First birthdays are so enjoyable. John
Comment from Angels27
You have done so beautifully for a dream Disney wish. The description was so vivid it brings alive Disney world. I was lost in the description. God bless your little angel...:)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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You have done so beautifully for a dream Disney wish. The description was so vivid it brings alive Disney world. I was lost in the description. God bless your little angel...:)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thanks Angels27 for reading and your wonderful commentary. John