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Comment from artemis53
Excellent, piece, Paris. Many are shortsighted and don't see they get signs everyday of God's love. They are true wrapped up in themselves to truly look about themselves.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Excellent, piece, Paris. Many are shortsighted and don't see they get signs everyday of God's love. They are true wrapped up in themselves to truly look about themselves.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Hello artemis53, thank you for your review. Yes it is true that many people don't see the signs, but part of Gods love is patience and so he will keep on trying to reach out to us, no matter how long it may take. You would too if it was your child.
Comment from Littlegirl38732
So beautiful and so very true. So many of us fail to see that God has blessed us so greatly! Its easy to cry out angrily to God when things don't go our way. But when times are hard, how many of us actually thank God for what we do have?! I love this!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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So beautiful and so very true. So many of us fail to see that God has blessed us so greatly! Its easy to cry out angrily to God when things don't go our way. But when times are hard, how many of us actually thank God for what we do have?! I love this!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thank you for the six star review Littlegirl, yes your words are so true, people go through life wearing a tight fitting blindfold which they refuse to loosen
Comment from juliedickson55
Hopeless, helpless and blind to the world, the beauty of nature, the gentleness of animals and children, and the love of fellow man...
good luck, bad feelings...no way to reach a person so absorbed in despair...
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Hopeless, helpless and blind to the world, the beauty of nature, the gentleness of animals and children, and the love of fellow man...
good luck, bad feelings...no way to reach a person so absorbed in despair...
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thank you for your comment
Comment from k.french
This is a very interesting piece of writing,when reading this poem it keeps you guessing and wondering what was going to happen next.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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This is a very interesting piece of writing,when reading this poem it keeps you guessing and wondering what was going to happen next.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Thank you Kelly, for the five star rating
Comment from Gungalo
So the man cried out in despair
" touch me God , and let me know you are here"
Where upon, God reached down and touched the man,
But the man just brushed the butterfly away and walked on.
Goes to show you that God speaks in the craziest little ways.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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So the man cried out in despair
" touch me God , and let me know you are here"
Where upon, God reached down and touched the man,
But the man just brushed the butterfly away and walked on.
Goes to show you that God speaks in the craziest little ways.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2012
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Hello Gungalo, I am so glad you enjoyed a moment spent reading ' Tears '
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Hello Gungalo, I am so glad you took a moment to read and enjoy ' Tears '
Comment from nancyjam
this is a beautiful poem of faith and a good
entry in the contest.
Mankind is sometimes to the blessings that
surround us. We see God every day if only
we would look with eyes of faith.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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this is a beautiful poem of faith and a good
entry in the contest.
Mankind is sometimes to the blessings that
surround us. We see God every day if only
we would look with eyes of faith.
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you nancyjam, So glad you were touched by ' Tears '
Comment from Thatguypk
I really like this story. It doesn't need to be about God either. It is a comment on so many people who go through life with their eyes closed and see so little of the things that are really important, because they are looking in the wrong places, and are focused on the wrong goals. Very thought provoking piece.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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I really like this story. It doesn't need to be about God either. It is a comment on so many people who go through life with their eyes closed and see so little of the things that are really important, because they are looking in the wrong places, and are focused on the wrong goals. Very thought provoking piece.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you, So glad you enjoyed ' Tears ' and yes the beauty of our creation, life and God is then, now and forever truly around us
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Why do I have to be out of 6's!?
What a profoundly spiritual and meaningful poem! I'm sad to say that at times in my life, I have been the BLIND one in the poem.
Just GREAT
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Why do I have to be out of 6's!?
What a profoundly spiritual and meaningful poem! I'm sad to say that at times in my life, I have been the BLIND one in the poem.
Just GREAT
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Hello Janice, I am so glad you enjoyed ' Tears '
Comment from visionary1234
oh dear - some people are so self absorbed and mired in ego and self pity, they just can't see what's right in front of their own faces!!! GRRR! Good faith poem here!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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oh dear - some people are so self absorbed and mired in ego and self pity, they just can't see what's right in front of their own faces!!! GRRR! Good faith poem here!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Yes I enjoyed writing ' Tears ' and it's so warming to know that it's presence is a meaningful one
Comment from mizzkris20
This poem has such a powerful message.
Gosh, I love it! Thank you for sharing.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Awesome job!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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This poem has such a powerful message.
Gosh, I love it! Thank you for sharing.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Awesome job!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012
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Thank you Mizzkris20, So delighted you enjoyed ' Tears '
