Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Rose of Sharon"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from SteveY
Nicely done with this one my friend. I love the author notes where this was described. Excellent job of remembering the feelings as they occurred.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Nicely done with this one my friend. I love the author notes where this was described. Excellent job of remembering the feelings as they occurred.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you Steve Y for your great and helpful review, something I really appreciate. With kindness, gudbjorg
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of rhyming couplets
You capitalize His in your second stanza but not in your first stanza
good alliteration in give a glimpse
and hold onto him
good proximate rhyme of beat/indeed
A most thoughtful and inspiring poem of faith :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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solid use of rhyming couplets
You capitalize His in your second stanza but not in your first stanza
good alliteration in give a glimpse
and hold onto him
good proximate rhyme of beat/indeed
A most thoughtful and inspiring poem of faith :-) Brooke
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem and give helpful comments. Great review. Sarah
Comment from LenSive
I think it is interesting...and has some potentially knock-out lines. "The Rose of Sharon..." is one of those. It begins well but, for me, fizzles out a bit with "shepherd of the lame", esp"ly since i don't understand the "filling your heart with his golden seeds."(?) Sometimes for us to get the right effect many drafts are necessary. I think that may well be the case here. A credible beginning, but it needs some refinement...
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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I think it is interesting...and has some potentially knock-out lines. "The Rose of Sharon..." is one of those. It begins well but, for me, fizzles out a bit with "shepherd of the lame", esp"ly since i don't understand the "filling your heart with his golden seeds."(?) Sometimes for us to get the right effect many drafts are necessary. I think that may well be the case here. A credible beginning, but it needs some refinement...
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, you've some very good points regarding my poem but this is how it came to me originally and had little to do with me it just came to me supernaturally.
Comment from dancerwriter
Beautiful title and poem.Rose of Sharon, a lovely pinky mauve, but I cannot see it as a "warrior" in any way,perhaps just a link to what God provides to enhance a garden, or a vase.There is hope in your message and a reminder of what can be, if you search for it.Good work. Lesley.j.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Beautiful title and poem.Rose of Sharon, a lovely pinky mauve, but I cannot see it as a "warrior" in any way,perhaps just a link to what God provides to enhance a garden, or a vase.There is hope in your message and a reminder of what can be, if you search for it.Good work. Lesley.j.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem, letting me know your feelings and thoughts about. This was really helpful. Sarah I
Comment from ahamranji
A very nice poem that inspires and helps to keep one's faith intact.
"Enwrapping you in his loving arms
Forever protecting you from harm."
These are my favorite lines. Regards.
R Jayachandran(ahamranji)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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A very nice poem that inspires and helps to keep one's faith intact.
"Enwrapping you in his loving arms
Forever protecting you from harm."
These are my favorite lines. Regards.
R Jayachandran(ahamranji)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, and really wonderful to hear that it encouraged your faith.
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I'm thrilling to hear my poem inspired your faith, and thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Adama
I was drawn to this poem because it has my name in it. I was pleased not to be disappointed by the content. This is simply a beautiful and encouraging poem.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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I was drawn to this poem because it has my name in it. I was pleased not to be disappointed by the content. This is simply a beautiful and encouraging poem.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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I'm glad to hear this about your name, and I'm glad my poem was encouraging to you. Thank you for reviewing it.
Comment from c_lucas
Flowering plants have their own healing abilities. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Flowering plants have their own healing abilities. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012
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Thank you for giving me such a positive review, words that I value beyond measure and encourage me to keep going with my writing.
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You're welcome, Sarahice. Charlie
Comment from Thatguypk
This is a beautiful poem, and one of which I shall inform my sister. Her name is Sharon, and my father was forever telling her she was named after the rose, with it's peculiar charm.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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This is a beautiful poem, and one of which I shall inform my sister. Her name is Sharon, and my father was forever telling her she was named after the rose, with it's peculiar charm.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, and telling my about your sister was very special. Found your profile very interesting, please keep writing. With my best regards, Sarah
Comment from terry drake
That is a new rose for me. I liked how you presented your poem and the story line was graced with well timed rhymes to enhance your theme. Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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That is a new rose for me. I liked how you presented your poem and the story line was graced with well timed rhymes to enhance your theme. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem, I highly appreciate your detailed view of it. Inspires my heart it keep going.
Comment from wordsareus
This is a lovely poem. I have never heard of the Rose of Sharon before but when I read the Author's Notes I understood the inspiration behind your poem.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2012
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This is a lovely poem. I have never heard of the Rose of Sharon before but when I read the Author's Notes I understood the inspiration behind your poem.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. It was very nice reading it.