Steve's Story-Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Mission"A collection of my poems
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Comment from Hollyhock
You really had me with this one. There I was, hanging on every heroic word, and you sold me a pizza!
I think this must be typical of your sense of humor.
I did enjoy the read because the whole piece was so well-written but I must admit to be disappointed by the let-down!
Good luck in the contest. Maybe my sense of humor is a little lacking on a Monday morning.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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You really had me with this one. There I was, hanging on every heroic word, and you sold me a pizza!
I think this must be typical of your sense of humor.
I did enjoy the read because the whole piece was so well-written but I must admit to be disappointed by the let-down!
Good luck in the contest. Maybe my sense of humor is a little lacking on a Monday morning.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Hmmm, I suspect the committee will be with you on this one, unfortunately.
Thanks for the kind words.
Comment from saychirah
This is a good poem.it is interesting,clear and easy to read and you kept to the rhyme scheme.I enjoyed it,you are a good writer and I hope to see more from you.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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This is a good poem.it is interesting,clear and easy to read and you kept to the rhyme scheme.I enjoyed it,you are a good writer and I hope to see more from you.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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Thank you, saychirah.
Steve
Comment from visionary1234
And here I was, all hooked into a Lord of the Rings journey , complete with ferryman, and you plop me into your howling last pizza verse! Doglet! you always break me up! :)
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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And here I was, all hooked into a Lord of the Rings journey , complete with ferryman, and you plop me into your howling last pizza verse! Doglet! you always break me up! :)
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2012
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This one was on the boil for a while and I couldn't see a way out of the 'mankind's fate' corner I had pained myself into so ridiulus ex machina it is.
Steve