All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I'm Possessed"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
42 total reviews
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Author ...
Under a brilliant and colourful picture at the top, your words are very descriptive and have left me wondering what you mean by 'finger-painting the sky.' That is something I have not heard before.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Hullo Author ...
Under a brilliant and colourful picture at the top, your words are very descriptive and have left me wondering what you mean by 'finger-painting the sky.' That is something I have not heard before.
As this is a Contest entry, I wish you well and thank you for sharing these thoughts with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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finger painting is what little kids do Nanette, when they're too young to hold a brush - so they dip their fingers in the paint, and paint with their fingers, in big streaks of color! :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
A virtual 6, none left! Love it, and the picture so compiments your words. This is a perfect, Naani, very well done and good luck in the contest! xsx
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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A virtual 6, none left! Love it, and the picture so compiments your words. This is a perfect, Naani, very well done and good luck in the contest! xsx
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx Sandy!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this it is a creative nanni that is very descriptive painting a picture with your words brining the art work to life well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Yes I liked this it is a creative nanni that is very descriptive painting a picture with your words brining the art work to life well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx Jill!
Comment from Heaven Bound
Let's see - what kind of word can we use to describe this? The word "exquisite" comes to mind. How beautiful the words and the flow. You accomplished so much in these 4 short lines. Thanks for this.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Let's see - what kind of word can we use to describe this? The word "exquisite" comes to mind. How beautiful the words and the flow. You accomplished so much in these 4 short lines. Thanks for this.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx so much HB!
Comment from LilHippie
this is glorious, picture and content. i love the thought of fingerpainting the sky. your work inspires such beauty, positive energy and enthusiasm. why do you so damn far from me? It is lovely and i know your island is so inspiring. i would love to garden in that tropical place!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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this is glorious, picture and content. i love the thought of fingerpainting the sky. your work inspires such beauty, positive energy and enthusiasm. why do you so damn far from me? It is lovely and i know your island is so inspiring. i would love to garden in that tropical place!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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yep - can't kill my garden stuff with an axe! it's all "me-proof", thank heaven! glad you liked this one too ... I've had the pic sitting on my desk-top for a couple of weeks now, knowing the right words would come along eventually ...
Comment from RaymondJohn
What a fascinating idea. I can imagine it, and it must be fun to see the colors serparate and merge as you see fit. Another fine Nani poem. I like it better all the time. Ray.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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What a fascinating idea. I can imagine it, and it must be fun to see the colors serparate and merge as you see fit. Another fine Nani poem. I like it better all the time. Ray.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx Ray! love these short pieces - such fun to write!
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your Naani poem is sensationally written with colorful imagery.
The art work you used is stunningly beautiful.
You used excellent alliteration with the S & P words.
You used great metaphor: "finger-painting the sky."
I enjoyed all four lines:
sometimes sunsets are so intense
I'm possessed
and must participate
in finger-painting the sky
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your well composed Naani poem to other reviewers.
Missy.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Poet,
Your Naani poem is sensationally written with colorful imagery.
The art work you used is stunningly beautiful.
You used excellent alliteration with the S & P words.
You used great metaphor: "finger-painting the sky."
I enjoyed all four lines:
sometimes sunsets are so intense
I'm possessed
and must participate
in finger-painting the sky
I wish you good luck in the contest.
I'd recommend your well composed Naani poem to other reviewers.
Missy.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx missy!
Comment from jaded831
I love your poem, it's motivational and fun. I can actually feel myself wanting to tackle life. The picture is ideal and young at heart, which only adds to your beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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I love your poem, it's motivational and fun. I can actually feel myself wanting to tackle life. The picture is ideal and young at heart, which only adds to your beautiful poem.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thank you so much j. - I've had that pic on my desktop for a while, knowing it's going to write something eventually! :)
Comment from cvcopac
Yes, sometimes they are so gorgeous one can feel enlarged enough to join the sun. Some childish wonderment radiates from this passionate observation. excellent. cvc
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Yes, sometimes they are so gorgeous one can feel enlarged enough to join the sun. Some childish wonderment radiates from this passionate observation. excellent. cvc
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx cv! this was a fun piece to write! :)
Comment from chasdflynn
Great imagery. I can feel the intensity of the sunset in your words. I love the description you can paint in such few words. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Great imagery. I can feel the intensity of the sunset in your words. I love the description you can paint in such few words. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx chas! I love these short pieces and really appreciate your taking time to read & review :)