All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Colors of Life"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
YEP YOU DESEVERED TO WIN WITH THIS ONE HOW SWEET HOW INNOCENT THIS WAS YOUR WORDS AND FLOW CAPTURED THE READER WITH EVERY LINE KUDOS YOU DESERVE IT !!
TK
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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YEP YOU DESEVERED TO WIN WITH THIS ONE HOW SWEET HOW INNOCENT THIS WAS YOUR WORDS AND FLOW CAPTURED THE READER WITH EVERY LINE KUDOS YOU DESERVE IT !!
TK
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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what a sweetie! thank you sooo much Sir Knight! I had some old wowser reviews on this one, so your magic '6' is especially appreciated! Best wishes, Sharyn
Comment from sibhus
Man, this is a riot and so real. I can just see that darling little girls bright inquireing mind being nailed shut forever by narrowmindness of the old old lady. This was really funny and enjoyed the coloring images that can easily been seen as a metaphore for life. I can def see why you won and congrats.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Man, this is a riot and so real. I can just see that darling little girls bright inquireing mind being nailed shut forever by narrowmindness of the old old lady. This was really funny and enjoyed the coloring images that can easily been seen as a metaphore for life. I can def see why you won and congrats.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx sib - unfortunately I've had some old wowser reviews as well on this one, proving the "nice nice old old lady" is still alive & well out there dammit! :) Sharyn
Comment from marycec
Great poem about a child's perspective on Jesus aka Him. In our tradition red is the colour for The Sacred Heart so you were right. I loved your analogies with Santa and your PS was great. I'm quite sure She doesn't mind at all.Good stuff.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Great poem about a child's perspective on Jesus aka Him. In our tradition red is the colour for The Sacred Heart so you were right. I loved your analogies with Santa and your PS was great. I'm quite sure She doesn't mind at all.Good stuff.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thank you so much Mary!
Comment from Crystal Carey
Good job winning the contest. I don't know who the lady was but SHE should have gotten herself an imagination. I think kids will do what they want with their pictures. Especially black and white pictures!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Good job winning the contest. I don't know who the lady was but SHE should have gotten herself an imagination. I think kids will do what they want with their pictures. Especially black and white pictures!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx Crystal! I still cringe when I see those boring pics! :)
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi Visionary1234,
Very imaginative and reflects a childs thoughts very well. Loved the ps and yes, I too think He or She doesn't mind. Thank you for sharing and congrats for the contest win.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Hi Visionary1234,
Very imaginative and reflects a childs thoughts very well. Loved the ps and yes, I too think He or She doesn't mind. Thank you for sharing and congrats for the contest win.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx mtns!
Comment from Scarbrems
This is adorable. Love the girl's voice throughout. Soo sweet. Who says he has to wear blue? Love the h H business. Of course, I was the annoying child who wanted to know why Jesus wasn't Cro-magnon man.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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This is adorable. Love the girl's voice throughout. Soo sweet. Who says he has to wear blue? Love the h H business. Of course, I was the annoying child who wanted to know why Jesus wasn't Cro-magnon man.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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hey thx emsey - I was a Sunday School escapee - much preferred to go fishing instead! Thx for your review - I had some old wowser reviews on this one, so your '6' is especially welcome! :) Sharyn ps: haven't seen you posting for a while??
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writer's block...
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This addresses the real questions of little kids that they sometimes have in Sunday School. I don't think Jesus minds. (Typo alert: In line 14, did you mean to write capital "H" or capital "J"?) Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
P.S. I just noticed that this was the contest winner, so congratulations are in order rather than good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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This addresses the real questions of little kids that they sometimes have in Sunday School. I don't think Jesus minds. (Typo alert: In line 14, did you mean to write capital "H" or capital "J"?) Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
P.S. I just noticed that this was the contest winner, so congratulations are in order rather than good luck!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx Jeanie! I'll ck out line 14! :)
Comment from dragonpoet
I think this seven-year-old is right. Maybe both Jesus and Santa should wear red. They are both the important people of Christmas. And red is a Christmas color. She is also right that we should always let children use their own creativity and ask them what they mean by it. Maybe they could teach us something.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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I think this seven-year-old is right. Maybe both Jesus and Santa should wear red. They are both the important people of Christmas. And red is a Christmas color. She is also right that we should always let children use their own creativity and ask them what they mean by it. Maybe they could teach us something.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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indeed dp - thank you so much - and I look forward to a RED Christmas, yes??? :) Sharyn
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You're welcome, Sharyn.
Joan
Comment from xxjsfuncxxxity
Fabulous poem in that wonderfully authentic childlike voice of innocent wonder. This was so dead on, I could go on and on pointing out all the things i liked about it, but that would be EVERYTHING, and since there's nothing I didn't like about it, NOTHING, I'll just leave you some happy little stars of appreciation, take my 1.12 member dollars and be on my merry way, ho ho ho...
Cheers!
js
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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Fabulous poem in that wonderfully authentic childlike voice of innocent wonder. This was so dead on, I could go on and on pointing out all the things i liked about it, but that would be EVERYTHING, and since there's nothing I didn't like about it, NOTHING, I'll just leave you some happy little stars of appreciation, take my 1.12 member dollars and be on my merry way, ho ho ho...
Cheers!
js
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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hey js - ho ho ho indeed you little bugger ... you should have seen the wowser reviews I got on this one - I should refer them on to you - they'd have a field day! :) Sharyn
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oh shit, now I gotta go look!!
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don't bother - one dear lady decided she didn't know what was "right" or not, but she just didn't like it ... another was "uncomfortable" with the subject matter ... poor dear ... even an innocent 7 year old can't wow old wowsers I'm afraid! another dear lady had "trouble finding rhymes" in my free verse ... what can I say? :)
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Ugh, nothing to say. I'll let Narcisa comment for me.
''Fock! E'stoopid!!!"
LOL
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Narcisa's much smarter than she looks.
Comment from misscookie
I tell you the dos and don'ts in writing get me more confused.
This is one thing I know .TYhat I enjoyed what ever you wrote I thought it was very cute. And I could realate with the seven year old and with you now.all in all this was a very refreshing read and thanks for my early morning smile.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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I tell you the dos and don'ts in writing get me more confused.
This is one thing I know .TYhat I enjoyed what ever you wrote I thought it was very cute. And I could realate with the seven year old and with you now.all in all this was a very refreshing read and thanks for my early morning smile.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2012
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thx miss cookie!
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Your very welcome.
Have a blessed week end.