The Heir Apparent
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Comment from ScarletClearwater
The End. I wish I had six stars to give for the ending here. It was a great on that left me entertained and thoughtful. Great job with this work.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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The End. I wish I had six stars to give for the ending here. It was a great on that left me entertained and thoughtful. Great job with this work.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much. I must admit, I am glad it is finally done.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Sasha, I haven't been this pleased with the ending of a story as now. This perfect ending is the last piece of the puzzle. Thanks for sharing your wonderful way of story telling. I look forward to the next.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Hi, Sasha, I haven't been this pleased with the ending of a story as now. This perfect ending is the last piece of the puzzle. Thanks for sharing your wonderful way of story telling. I look forward to the next.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much. I always look forward to your comments and am just thrilled you enjoyed this last chapter somuch.
Comment from Readywriter52
I thought this was a good ending to the story. I didn't expect the authorities to contribute any supernatural end to James's father or Alfina. The authorities are logical to the end. Mac and James are great friends. The family is getting passed their traumas. James's father was a very unique serial killer.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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I thought this was a good ending to the story. I didn't expect the authorities to contribute any supernatural end to James's father or Alfina. The authorities are logical to the end. Mac and James are great friends. The family is getting passed their traumas. James's father was a very unique serial killer.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Most serial killers have sad and damaging childhoods. But, as far as I am concerned, nothing justifies killing for the fun of it.
Comment from adewpearl
A conversation between Mac and James is the absolute perfect way to end this story. I like how you tell just enough of what is happening with the family without belaboring anything, and I love the rapport between James and Mac. I so want to give you a six for the entire book and how very much I have appreciated every page, but I have no sixes left for the week.
This has been such a marvelous character study with a real page-turner of a plot :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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A conversation between Mac and James is the absolute perfect way to end this story. I like how you tell just enough of what is happening with the family without belaboring anything, and I love the rapport between James and Mac. I so want to give you a six for the entire book and how very much I have appreciated every page, but I have no sixes left for the week.
This has been such a marvelous character study with a real page-turner of a plot :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2012
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Just knowing you enjoyed it is enough for me. Thank you so much for catching ALL THE MISSING COMMAS!!!!
