Are you going to San Francisco?
A plan comes together21 total reviews
Comment from visionary1234
Good job! I lived in SF for many years and visited Alcatraz - you've got the cold right, that's for sure! Good flash fiction - not forced at all - good storytelling moved along by the dialogue with enough detail/ description etc to give us a vivid setting. well done!
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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Good job! I lived in SF for many years and visited Alcatraz - you've got the cold right, that's for sure! Good flash fiction - not forced at all - good storytelling moved along by the dialogue with enough detail/ description etc to give us a vivid setting. well done!
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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Thank you very much for your kind words. I loved the four days we spent in SF. I have posted about the holiday I won want to know more.