The Heir Apparent
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Comment from barkingdog
If you need to use large print in order to write, go ahead and do it. Maybe post notice at the top of your chapter. Some don't bother to read the notes. They may be the ones who tend to complain.
It reads very well. One heads-up: you have used the word Grandmother eight times in the third paragraph. You may need an alternative name for her.
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reply by the author on 14-May-2012
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If you need to use large print in order to write, go ahead and do it. Maybe post notice at the top of your chapter. Some don't bother to read the notes. They may be the ones who tend to complain.
It reads very well. One heads-up: you have used the word Grandmother eight times in the third paragraph. You may need an alternative name for her.
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Comment Written 14-May-2012
reply by the author on 14-May-2012
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Thanks for the suggestion. I'll go over that paragraph and see what I can do to fix it.
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Janie King
Miama and think (I think Miami ends with an "i")...On the Way Hone (Home)...campus desplays impressive (displays)..stopo blaming stop)..good chapter..don't worry about the font...I'm dealing with two cataracts and make typo's because I can't distinguish letters...Good chapter. God bless.
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Miama and think (I think Miami ends with an "i")...On the Way Hone (Home)...campus desplays impressive (displays)..stopo blaming stop)..good chapter..don't worry about the font...I'm dealing with two cataracts and make typo's because I can't distinguish letters...Good chapter. God bless.
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Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 14-May-2012
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I agree, he shouldn't make any rash decisions at this point. Glad you liked this.
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I am blind in one eye and see double with the other. No excuses allowed but I am having a terrible time with my so called good eye. I think there is a real possibility this will be my last book. There doesn't seem to be much the doctor can do for it so it is probably time to move on. Thanks, I am pleased you liked this chapter.
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double vision..girl you're a weonder and truly dedicated to what you are doing for sure..I do admire you..God bless.
