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Gima The Beginning

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fantasy adventure

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Comment from turtledove
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This is so new to me but certainly enjoyed this! Will have to read more of the other chapters! So much detail and information, hope to see this in print..I assume you are planning to publish...I think more people would enjoy your writing, thks, turtledove :)

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 Comment Written 08-May-2012


reply by the author on 08-May-2012
    Thank you, turtle dove. This is my first try at a book. I'm encouraged by your review but incurably shy. We'll see. :)
reply by turtledove on 08-May-2012
    barking dog, you're welcome! td I'm surprized, I thought maybe you have written before...wow!
reply by the author on 08-May-2012
    Like I said. Google is my best friend and teacher. Many old master writer to read, Free and many questions on grammar and punctuation answered by example and tests on the sites. :)
reply by turtledove on 08-May-2012
    barking dog, I see...can you direct me...just go to google and google the question I have? It is that easy. Could save me the 129. I'm paying on editing course...maybe I better take it anyways. Well, thks I will have to check it out, turtledove.