Gima The Beginning
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Comment from adewpearl
you get inside Gima's defiant inner thoughts effectively
vivid and gruesome detail of Jacknel's attacks on Gina
and strong action verbs that add power to the scene
Graphic and horrific detail of the torture of Pike and Pike's screams
Vivid description of setting of the bar
Brooke
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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you get inside Gima's defiant inner thoughts effectively
vivid and gruesome detail of Jacknel's attacks on Gina
and strong action verbs that add power to the scene
Graphic and horrific detail of the torture of Pike and Pike's screams
Vivid description of setting of the bar
Brooke
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2012
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Thank you, Brooke for your fine review.:) ellen