The Kiss
Teenagers in a car24 total reviews
Comment from Allison78
Yuck, that's pretty gross! I think this is interesting but not sure I would have gone there. Well written, good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
Yuck, that's pretty gross! I think this is interesting but not sure I would have gone there. Well written, good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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thank u
Comment from Janie King
Wow, well I'd say that you told the whole story..I've never tried to tell a whole story in such few words. Good luck in the contest..you did a great job. God bless.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
Wow, well I'd say that you told the whole story..I've never tried to tell a whole story in such few words. Good luck in the contest..you did a great job. God bless.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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thank u so much
Comment from tinams
Very funny and a worthy entry to the 100 Word Dash III Competition. You used all of the mandatory words in an innovative way :) Tina
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
Very funny and a worthy entry to the 100 Word Dash III Competition. You used all of the mandatory words in an innovative way :) Tina
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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thank u so much
Comment from uniqueauthor
Very well written blurb. It could interest somebody in reading a book written around the subject Love is Blind. Love is blind, but not deaf and dumb.
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
Very well written blurb. It could interest somebody in reading a book written around the subject Love is Blind. Love is blind, but not deaf and dumb.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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yes that would and it explains why we have so many divorces, thank you for the review
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many people think marriage is a one sided commitment, at best, and the woman is the side that is committed.