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The Kiss

Teenagers in a car

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Comment from Allison78
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Yuck, that's pretty gross! I think this is interesting but not sure I would have gone there. Well written, good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
    thank u
Comment from Janie King
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Wow, well I'd say that you told the whole story..I've never tried to tell a whole story in such few words. Good luck in the contest..you did a great job. God bless.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
    thank u so much
Comment from tinams
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Very funny and a worthy entry to the 100 Word Dash III Competition. You used all of the mandatory words in an innovative way :) Tina

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
    thank u so much
Comment from uniqueauthor
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Very well written blurb. It could interest somebody in reading a book written around the subject Love is Blind. Love is blind, but not deaf and dumb.

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 Comment Written 05-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
    yes that would and it explains why we have so many divorces, thank you for the review
reply by uniqueauthor on 05-Apr-2012
    many people think marriage is a one sided commitment, at best, and the woman is the side that is committed.