Change of Heart
Life is sooooo complicated.22 total reviews
Comment from Anisa-
Hah, interesting twist at the end of this short story. I thought you did a good job with the prompt entry. Best of luck in the contest.
Anisa
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Hah, interesting twist at the end of this short story. I thought you did a good job with the prompt entry. Best of luck in the contest.
Anisa
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Thank you, Anisa. I'm glad you enjoyed. X
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Well done! Your unexpected ending shouldn't surprise anyone who recognizes your unique discriptions - "a couple distilleries too much to drink"? Perfect! Worthy of a six, but Tom is being stingy again. :) Nancy
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Well done! Your unexpected ending shouldn't surprise anyone who recognizes your unique discriptions - "a couple distilleries too much to drink"? Perfect! Worthy of a six, but Tom is being stingy again. :) Nancy
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Thank you, Nancy. I'm delighted you enjoyed. X