The Heir Apparent
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Comment from adewpearl
But Angela was insistent, and I knew - add comma
What a very touching moment as Angela thanks Grandmother for planting those yellow roses - you have me crying yet again.
show me any affection, and if - add comma
Dr. Drake was late, giving - add comma
Good morning, Alfina - add comma
Brooke :-)
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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But Angela was insistent, and I knew - add comma
What a very touching moment as Angela thanks Grandmother for planting those yellow roses - you have me crying yet again.
show me any affection, and if - add comma
Dr. Drake was late, giving - add comma
Good morning, Alfina - add comma
Brooke :-)
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Thanks for catching the spags. Angela is turning out to be a no nonsense person. Just what Grandmother needs.
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I think they make a great pair :-)