The Morning After
A little too much wine21 total reviews
Comment from Capture
Haven't all of us felt this way? The picture you paint in the confines of the discipline which is required by this form truly encapsulates the essence of the morning after.
Good rhyme, truly striking overall effect.
Best of luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
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Haven't all of us felt this way? The picture you paint in the confines of the discipline which is required by this form truly encapsulates the essence of the morning after.
Good rhyme, truly striking overall effect.
Best of luck in the contest!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2012
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I think most of us have felt this way at one time or another. I'm glad you liked my poem. Thanks for the great review.