Metaphorical Seas
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "The Myth of the Sea"a series of blank impressions
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Wow! This is beautiful, well-crafted, vividl, and touching. I've written some blank-verse poems. I find the style challenging. You've done quite well telling about the famous myth in that style.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Wow! This is beautiful, well-crafted, vividl, and touching. I've written some blank-verse poems. I find the style challenging. You've done quite well telling about the famous myth in that style.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Hello there
Thank you for the encouragement â?? I wish you well
phill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
no longer earthbound, Icarus ascends. <<< Ohhh... that explains it... wondered what was going on here
Clever with surprise ending. Nicely done!
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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no longer earthbound, Icarus ascends. <<< Ohhh... that explains it... wondered what was going on here
Clever with surprise ending. Nicely done!
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Comment Written 21-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2012
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Thank you again.
I was uncertain if the general reader would know about the myth and the Icarian Sea etc: but...I shall see I suppose - it is no good writing if it is too obscure - still, your response is encouraging and I thank you so much.
Warm regards
phill
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Just explain it in author's notes.
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thank you
will do