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The Heir Apparent

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A family learns their father is a serial killer

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Comment from c_lucas
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The more I read about James' father, the more I am in favor of a slow agonizing death. The Chinese's The Death of a Thousand Nights would be just the beginning. Very good job.

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 Comment Written 29-Feb-2012


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
    Sounds good to me too. He is really a piece of work. Glad you like this one.
reply by c_lucas on 29-Feb-2012
    You're welcome, Sasha. Charlie