Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Vanity Solutions"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
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Comment from WilliamDeen
Your poem, Vanity Solutions, is hilarious! But what a good idea! I think I will start doing this myself! At least it will be a funny photo, instead of a sad one! LOL Good 5-7-5 syllable form.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Your poem, Vanity Solutions, is hilarious! But what a good idea! I think I will start doing this myself! At least it will be a funny photo, instead of a sad one! LOL Good 5-7-5 syllable form.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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maybe there will be a trend! Thank you so much for your kind words and generous review!!
Comment from steevie
Now this is what I call an awesome 5-7-5 poem.
Its so brutally honest although since we're telling the truth here ... this photo atop your poem leaves me feeling a little squeamish ... ROFL
And now I shall go to your profile page and seek out the real photo of you (if there is one of course ... LOL)
well done, Play
take care
steve
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Now this is what I call an awesome 5-7-5 poem.
Its so brutally honest although since we're telling the truth here ... this photo atop your poem leaves me feeling a little squeamish ... ROFL
And now I shall go to your profile page and seek out the real photo of you (if there is one of course ... LOL)
well done, Play
take care
steve
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much Steve, for your kind words and generous review!! You wont find a pic of me, because I cant stand on my head! Ha..
Comment from Bobbi22
I think the rat in the picture should try standing on her head. This poem is laugh out loud funny. Too bad by the time we need to stand on our heads the rest of the body is pretty worn down too. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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I think the rat in the picture should try standing on her head. This poem is laugh out loud funny. Too bad by the time we need to stand on our heads the rest of the body is pretty worn down too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words and generous review!!
Comment from AlmostAshley3
Very very interesting picture I MUST say hah and it completely goes with the 575, I was wondering though where the standing on my head comes in with the picture?
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Very very interesting picture I MUST say hah and it completely goes with the 575, I was wondering though where the standing on my head comes in with the picture?
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Well, its more flattering for older ladies(like me) if they stand on their head for a picture, because everything shifts back to when they were younger. Thank you for your kind review!!
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Haha oh goodness
Comment from words
Oh, you gave me quite the giggle with this one.
Think I will take your advice in my next photo session:gravity set in
so now I pose for snapshots
standing on my head
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Oh, you gave me quite the giggle with this one.
Think I will take your advice in my next photo session:gravity set in
so now I pose for snapshots
standing on my head
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words and generous review!!
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi playinaround,
This is a delightful 5/7/5 poem and one that made me laugh. The picture you chose is hilarious, as well. This poem reminds me of the saying...whatever works, hurts. What doesn't hurt gets in the way. Love this humorous poem....bklessings, chey
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Hi playinaround,
This is a delightful 5/7/5 poem and one that made me laugh. The picture you chose is hilarious, as well. This poem reminds me of the saying...whatever works, hurts. What doesn't hurt gets in the way. Love this humorous poem....bklessings, chey
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much chey for your observation, insight and kind review!!
Comment from Kingsland
Your attempt at humor is rather droll, but well written. The picture fits the thought quite well. This seemed to fit the criteria of the format for this poem. I enjoyed reading it... John
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Your attempt at humor is rather droll, but well written. The picture fits the thought quite well. This seemed to fit the criteria of the format for this poem. I enjoyed reading it... John
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you John, for your kind and generous review!!
Comment from Gina513
So funny! Ahh the problems of aging, unfortunately it will happen to all of us one day! Thanks for sharing such an enjoyable and entertaining poem!
Gina
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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So funny! Ahh the problems of aging, unfortunately it will happen to all of us one day! Thanks for sharing such an enjoyable and entertaining poem!
Gina
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much Gina, for your kind and generous review!!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love it! No sixes left, but you would have had it if I had! Isn't this the words of most natural women, especially after childbirth? I adore the picture, so even cows have the same problem??? This would have been so good in a contest. xsx
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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I love it! No sixes left, but you would have had it if I had! Isn't this the words of most natural women, especially after childbirth? I adore the picture, so even cows have the same problem??? This would have been so good in a contest. xsx
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for this most encouraging review!! I had fun with it!
Comment from Trybuck
A little humor
goes a long way
to help old rats
have a better day
So please, pass the cheese
and quit being such a tease
or find yourself
getting up off your knees
Well done with your 5/7/5 - a humorous look at the effects of aging, Buck
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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A little humor
goes a long way
to help old rats
have a better day
So please, pass the cheese
and quit being such a tease
or find yourself
getting up off your knees
Well done with your 5/7/5 - a humorous look at the effects of aging, Buck
Comment Written 01-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for this poetic review! I appreciate the adorable poem, written just for me!!
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You're welcome, Buck