Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "part 4, Chapter 16"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from jadapenn
Hi Barbara, a good chapter after the last brutal one. It's about time these guys stumbled across whoever is terrorising Anna and do something to him. This poor woman can't move. Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Hi Barbara, a good chapter after the last brutal one. It's about time these guys stumbled across whoever is terrorising Anna and do something to him. This poor woman can't move. Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
well I have to say, having been following this story for sometime, the sheer horror of spouse abuse truly comes to the fore, this continues to grip my attention to the extreme!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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well I have to say, having been following this story for sometime, the sheer horror of spouse abuse truly comes to the fore, this continues to grip my attention to the extreme!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
It looks like your team from the special forces is going to protect Anna, Troy and Michael. I bet her exes mother is behind all the bullshit. Your latest chapter is marvelously written. Your writing packs an emotional punch in this chapter for Anna and Troy both. Your story paints a picture in the readers head. I look forward to reading more chapters to your story. It's getting intriguing. You are doing a extremely fine job writing this chapter. Keep on writing with your creative pen. Please have a fabulous day,my friend...Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Barbara,
It looks like your team from the special forces is going to protect Anna, Troy and Michael. I bet her exes mother is behind all the bullshit. Your latest chapter is marvelously written. Your writing packs an emotional punch in this chapter for Anna and Troy both. Your story paints a picture in the readers head. I look forward to reading more chapters to your story. It's getting intriguing. You are doing a extremely fine job writing this chapter. Keep on writing with your creative pen. Please have a fabulous day,my friend...Melissa
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from samandlancelot
Barbara,
Domestic violence is a horrible reality for too many women. Anna seems torn between not making a big deal out of the danger she is in & realizing her death is the only way this could end.
You have a lot of good tension in your story.
"i (I) have his license plate number."
Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Barbara,
Domestic violence is a horrible reality for too many women. Anna seems torn between not making a big deal out of the danger she is in & realizing her death is the only way this could end.
You have a lot of good tension in your story.
"i (I) have his license plate number."
Patricia
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll fix that error.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
It is so essential you did not allow your story to end
when Bobby was sent to prison. There are so many important
lessons you are teaching to women (and possibly men) as
they read along with you.
I look forward to continuing with you
love,
jan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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barbara:
It is so essential you did not allow your story to end
when Bobby was sent to prison. There are so many important
lessons you are teaching to women (and possibly men) as
they read along with you.
I look forward to continuing with you
love,
jan
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Anisa-
I think I am following these in order ... Lol! The sequence makes sense in my head, anyways. Great job with this chapter, you're managing to keep the suspense and drama.
Looking forward to the next.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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I think I am following these in order ... Lol! The sequence makes sense in my head, anyways. Great job with this chapter, you're managing to keep the suspense and drama.
Looking forward to the next.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from axelbeariter
"i have his license plate number."/Use a capital I here----"Earlier this evening air was let out of my tire and a threatening note was left on my windshield./Put a comma after evening----He'll follow you to the office, but stay outside./Although I know you mean Sam, others may think he wanted Anna to stay outside, so for clarity write: He'll follow you to the office and stay outside.----Another good chapter to move the story along.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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"i have his license plate number."/Use a capital I here----"Earlier this evening air was let out of my tire and a threatening note was left on my windshield./Put a comma after evening----He'll follow you to the office, but stay outside./Although I know you mean Sam, others may think he wanted Anna to stay outside, so for clarity write: He'll follow you to the office and stay outside.----Another good chapter to move the story along.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review. I will take care of those areas.
Comment from Rama Rao
Excellent post as usual.
It's good to see Troy taking such good care of Anna. Sensors on the windows and bodyguard on the couch in the living room. You have built up the story well, and i can't wait to read about the next attempt and the culprit getting caught to be handled right and proper by the cops.
Great going, Barbara.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Excellent post as usual.
It's good to see Troy taking such good care of Anna. Sensors on the windows and bodyguard on the couch in the living room. You have built up the story well, and i can't wait to read about the next attempt and the culprit getting caught to be handled right and proper by the cops.
Great going, Barbara.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
It's good to see the proper precautions are being taken, Barbara. And yes, the police aren't there to deter crime, only to catch the criminal afterward. No wonder people buy guns. Well written, Barbara. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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It's good to see the proper precautions are being taken, Barbara. And yes, the police aren't there to deter crime, only to catch the criminal afterward. No wonder people buy guns. Well written, Barbara. :) Nancy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Well written as always :) This chapter was really a lift for the reader and I'm sure Anna thought the same ;p
Glad that Troy is able to bring 'reinforcements' for Anna's protection!
Excellent!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Well written as always :) This chapter was really a lift for the reader and I'm sure Anna thought the same ;p
Glad that Troy is able to bring 'reinforcements' for Anna's protection!
Excellent!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
