The Red Dress
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Comment from AlexAX
She couldn't wait for it to be over? Oh wow, poor Nick. I think she is infatuated with Nick and how he loves her, is making her blind to the truth of her own feelings. But she is still young and working things out. I feel so sorry for Nick, he is doing everything he can think of to please her. Good old dad, finally doing something about Fiona's drinking. Not sure about this line .. Lisa was more determined than ever to not only get there, but to do everything in her power to feel as much for Nick, as she had for him.? Is it supposed to be "as he had for her"? Maybe it's just the way I'm looking at it lol Cannot wait for the next one, sounds interesting. Alex :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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She couldn't wait for it to be over? Oh wow, poor Nick. I think she is infatuated with Nick and how he loves her, is making her blind to the truth of her own feelings. But she is still young and working things out. I feel so sorry for Nick, he is doing everything he can think of to please her. Good old dad, finally doing something about Fiona's drinking. Not sure about this line .. Lisa was more determined than ever to not only get there, but to do everything in her power to feel as much for Nick, as she had for him.? Is it supposed to be "as he had for her"? Maybe it's just the way I'm looking at it lol Cannot wait for the next one, sounds interesting. Alex :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Well, as you now know, things don't go exactly to plan! Thank you so much for your input, I enjoy reading your take on it all. Thank you. Alexis x
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You're welcome :) I love reading it lol You just drag me into it every time. Alex :)
Comment from tonytnt
I really enjoyed reading this though Im a little lost because its the first chapter to read. Still its easy to follow and i liked it . Good story I will have to go back and catch up on the other chapters.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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I really enjoyed reading this though Im a little lost because its the first chapter to read. Still its easy to follow and i liked it . Good story I will have to go back and catch up on the other chapters.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Many thanks for your wonderful review, I really appreciate it. Chapter 39 is now posted. Alexis x
Comment from debskatz
Hey alexis,
Interesting chapter! Pity she didn't like having sex with Nick. You've certainly titillated my mind about the next chapter which I await with bated breath! lol
Only 1 spag:
When they arrived at Gatwick(,) she was met
Good job!
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Hey alexis,
Interesting chapter! Pity she didn't like having sex with Nick. You've certainly titillated my mind about the next chapter which I await with bated breath! lol
Only 1 spag:
When they arrived at Gatwick(,) she was met
Good job!
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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Only one spag! I must be on one of my good days. God help me tomorrow! Thank you so much, Boss, something must be sinking into the old grey matter occasionally. Take care, Alexis x
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is a well written and well presented chapter. I love the artwork you have chosen, it is eye catching and grabs the reader's attention. Even though I have only read one of the previous chapters I was still able to follow the storyline and get to grips with Lisa's character. I am probably biased as I love reading about characters with a wealthy lifestyle, and lots of glitz and glamour so this chapter provided all that for me and more. Your authors notes set the scene for the next chapter and ensure your audience want to tune in for more. Great stuff, I really enjoyed the read x
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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This is a well written and well presented chapter. I love the artwork you have chosen, it is eye catching and grabs the reader's attention. Even though I have only read one of the previous chapters I was still able to follow the storyline and get to grips with Lisa's character. I am probably biased as I love reading about characters with a wealthy lifestyle, and lots of glitz and glamour so this chapter provided all that for me and more. Your authors notes set the scene for the next chapter and ensure your audience want to tune in for more. Great stuff, I really enjoyed the read x
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2012
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I can't thank you enough for your wonderful review. I also love reading about the glitzier side of life because it gets you out of the same old, same old for a while. I think it's all the better for knowing that is just a façade that can crumble quicker than sand with the flip of a coin.Oh, the joys of fiction! Alexis x