The Red Dress
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Comment from MumEsGirl
I like this chapter. I sense disaster in this relationship for day one. Lisa doesnt have the same chemistry with Nick as she did with Alan.
She is still too young for marriage. This is put across very well here. I see that she is still taken with materialistic things and I dont think she feels strongly about Nick to marry him
kate
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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I like this chapter. I sense disaster in this relationship for day one. Lisa doesnt have the same chemistry with Nick as she did with Alan.
She is still too young for marriage. This is put across very well here. I see that she is still taken with materialistic things and I dont think she feels strongly about Nick to marry him
kate
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Comment Written 05-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2012
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I suppose the fact that she's only seventeen has to be taken into account (and the fact her mothers a head case!) Thank you so much for your great review. Alexis x