The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Waiting Game"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from Deejharrington
Now your giving us homework? But I guess I'll be googling those terms.
The reader feels for James, for all his knowledge and education, he still is open to all the human emotions of destroying his own family. He knows he will bare part of the blame, instead of where it belongs, on his father.
deb
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Now your giving us homework? But I guess I'll be googling those terms.
The reader feels for James, for all his knowledge and education, he still is open to all the human emotions of destroying his own family. He knows he will bare part of the blame, instead of where it belongs, on his father.
deb
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Good luck with Google...It took me a long time to find out what I have been interested in for so long was actually called.
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I lied, I probably won't look them up. I'll take your word about them:)
deb
Comment from writerwish
Must be a horror to absolutely know your father is a killer. Love the writing and hoe much this sounded realistic. I had to go back and look twice to make sure it is fiction. Of course with our fathers, it made me more suspicious. Irene
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Must be a horror to absolutely know your father is a killer. Love the writing and hoe much this sounded realistic. I had to go back and look twice to make sure it is fiction. Of course with our fathers, it made me more suspicious. Irene
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Sadly, there are many families that have experienced this.
Comment from wiljacro
HI! Smurphgirl, so,now that we are sat on the edge of our seat, we have to cool down and wait for another episode to find out just what happens when he opens the darn door! Don't let it be too long, Please! The suspense is getting to me, but please, don't let him trip and put himself into intensive care, so that we are kept waiting, even longer! wiljacro.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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HI! Smurphgirl, so,now that we are sat on the edge of our seat, we have to cool down and wait for another episode to find out just what happens when he opens the darn door! Don't let it be too long, Please! The suspense is getting to me, but please, don't let him trip and put himself into intensive care, so that we are kept waiting, even longer! wiljacro.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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I promise, I plan to post it tomorrow.
Comment from adewpearl
in common then, and fourteen years later - add comma
Yeah, Valerie, my dream has also been to have a doctorate in the mid-Cenozoic era. LOL :-)
Brooke
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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in common then, and fourteen years later - add comma
Yeah, Valerie, my dream has also been to have a doctorate in the mid-Cenozoic era. LOL :-)
Brooke
Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Don't make fun of me....I really have always wanted to study this aspect of paleobiology...he he he.
Comment from CHarte
This sounds like a good book. It is well written and pulls the reader in with a strong character and a great hook.
I'm off to read the next chapter. Great job!
Collette
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This sounds like a good book. It is well written and pulls the reader in with a strong character and a great hook.
I'm off to read the next chapter. Great job!
Collette
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2012
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Thanks, I am pleased you like it so far.
Comment from Janie King
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I think this you just need to delete from the beginning of the piece since it's at the bottom of the piece. Good thus far...I'm on this journey and await the next piece. God bless.
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The fun part about writing a book, is th ????????????????????
I think this you just need to delete from the beginning of the piece since it's at the bottom of the piece. Good thus far...I'm on this journey and await the next piece. God bless.
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2012
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The author's notes will not be included in the book...it is just information for the reviewer.