Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Walter L. Jones
Just pure joy to read, natural flowing, presentation warm engaging, curled up by the fire with a good book, a good drink, and lover lost in me and my mind.
Excellent write.. Walt
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Just pure joy to read, natural flowing, presentation warm engaging, curled up by the fire with a good book, a good drink, and lover lost in me and my mind.
Excellent write.. Walt
Comment Written 20-Jan-2005
Comment from Sweetie-kin
Great is the word this little "Stimuli" brings to me. Thanks for the gentle and
yet big voice that I hear... I would encourage all to share this poem for all
times.
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Great is the word this little "Stimuli" brings to me. Thanks for the gentle and
yet big voice that I hear... I would encourage all to share this poem for all
times.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2005
Comment from Mrs Jones
To hear the whispers of a gentle breeze
blow through the forest
and the waves crash at my feet.
You did good as ever. I loved the opening lines. A beautiful verse.
Cheers
Rose
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To hear the whispers of a gentle breeze
blow through the forest
and the waves crash at my feet.
You did good as ever. I loved the opening lines. A beautiful verse.
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 20-Jan-2005
Comment from Rx kingpen
you did a great job with this one too. i'm thoroughly enjoying you muse, the THE..keep at it. This was smooth, flowed nicely, not much to complain about. cheers, tj
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you did a great job with this one too. i'm thoroughly enjoying you muse, the THE..keep at it. This was smooth, flowed nicely, not much to complain about. cheers, tj
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2005