Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Lovely Soul"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
48 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Farm life is basic
Understanding
Man's relationship
with domestic animals
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Farm life is basic
Understanding
Man's relationship
with domestic animals
****
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your warn and meaningful review, it was really helpful. Gb
Comment from robyn corum
GB,
What a beautiful poem -- filled with a heartbreakingly sweet and comforting message of love and hope. I really enjoyed it and I'm sure that your sister would be sooo pleased. *smile* I am truly sorry for your loss. Sounds like she was an extra special blessing in your life.
One TINY note...?
1.) Forever in Heaven she will be,
--> here the scansion seemed off. The 'forever' in the opening makes me stumble and lose the rhythm. If you could smooth that out the poem would be even better!
--> And now in heaven she will be. (?)
2.) If you DID take my suggestion, that would make two of your lines start with 'and' - not so good. For the second line in that stanza, consider 'they'...?
Thanks for your kindness in listening to my thoughts. Happy week!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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GB,
What a beautiful poem -- filled with a heartbreakingly sweet and comforting message of love and hope. I really enjoyed it and I'm sure that your sister would be sooo pleased. *smile* I am truly sorry for your loss. Sounds like she was an extra special blessing in your life.
One TINY note...?
1.) Forever in Heaven she will be,
--> here the scansion seemed off. The 'forever' in the opening makes me stumble and lose the rhythm. If you could smooth that out the poem would be even better!
--> And now in heaven she will be. (?)
2.) If you DID take my suggestion, that would make two of your lines start with 'and' - not so good. For the second line in that stanza, consider 'they'...?
Thanks for your kindness in listening to my thoughts. Happy week!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your warm and meaningful review and especially your note about few imporvements. It was very helpful and I'll happily consider your suggestions. Gb
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a soul taken up to the heavenly home. The angels come to assist her on get journey to heaven where her soul can finally finds peace.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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A very well-written poem about a soul taken up to the heavenly home. The angels come to assist her on get journey to heaven where her soul can finally finds peace.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your warm and helpful review. Gb
Comment from Andrewfo
A beautifully rhyming poem, using the aabb form with good alliteration and meter, this is touched with pathos and deep emotion - and yet with a hope that shines through it with faith for the future of Eternity.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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A beautifully rhyming poem, using the aabb form with good alliteration and meter, this is touched with pathos and deep emotion - and yet with a hope that shines through it with faith for the future of Eternity.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for writing a wonderful review on my poem. It is truly helpful. Merry Christmas
Comment from Leineco
This really is a lovely expression of memory and faith in the ultimate fate of your sister. I am sorry you lost her. I am glad you have the peace of mind knowing she is resting in heaven :-)
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This really is a lovely expression of memory and faith in the ultimate fate of your sister. I am sorry you lost her. I am glad you have the peace of mind knowing she is resting in heaven :-)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for such a beautiful reaction and review to my poem. I'm really honored. With kindness, Gudbjorg
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice flow to this poem about death and how one should not be afraid to die because life after death is much happier. Though we do miss them on Earth.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Nice flow to this poem about death and how one should not be afraid to die because life after death is much happier. Though we do miss them on Earth.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderfully worded review, I really appreciate it. With much kindness, Gudbjorg
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You are so very welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from Emeka13
Nothing g is more therapeutic than when you write for or about a loved one who has departed. Your strong feeling come our clearly. Above all, you are confident that she is in heaven:
'Angels sing and hold her hand
And bring her to the promised land'.
The end is very serene. Love it.
May the good Lord continue to comfort you on the loss.
Thank you
Remain blessed.
Emeka
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Nothing g is more therapeutic than when you write for or about a loved one who has departed. Your strong feeling come our clearly. Above all, you are confident that she is in heaven:
'Angels sing and hold her hand
And bring her to the promised land'.
The end is very serene. Love it.
May the good Lord continue to comfort you on the loss.
Thank you
Remain blessed.
Emeka
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Send you a heartfelt thank you for a very helpful and wonderful review, I really appreciate it. With much kindness, Gudbjorg
Comment from Jose Saic
Is a beautiful poem of love and tenderness to the sister of the poet in which, the verses she has departure to Heaven, also tell us, that our believing in our Lord can give the necessary strengh to be confident of His love and mercy. I am sure that the poet sister is in heaven
Excellent poem of love.
Congratulations
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Is a beautiful poem of love and tenderness to the sister of the poet in which, the verses she has departure to Heaven, also tell us, that our believing in our Lord can give the necessary strengh to be confident of His love and mercy. I am sure that the poet sister is in heaven
Excellent poem of love.
Congratulations
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your beautiful reaction to my poem. I'm truly honoured. With kindness, Gudbjorg
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You are welcome, blessings.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Wish I had a six star rating left for this -- both words and picture work together in peaceful harmony to speak of the crossing. Weep for awhile and then lift your eyes heavenward where you will see her in a better life. I am a cancer survivor. Not really sure why I survived, but it does help one see life differently.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012
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Wish I had a six star rating left for this -- both words and picture work together in peaceful harmony to speak of the crossing. Weep for awhile and then lift your eyes heavenward where you will see her in a better life. I am a cancer survivor. Not really sure why I survived, but it does help one see life differently.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2012
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This is a wonderful faith building testimony of God's loving care for us all. We are in His hands. Thank you so much for writing. With love and prayers, Sarah
Comment from santapola
A sad story but you have turned it into something that you can cope with and for that I am happy for you and hope you feelings sustain you through hard times
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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A sad story but you have turned it into something that you can cope with and for that I am happy for you and hope you feelings sustain you through hard times
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2012
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Thank you for your kind review. Yes, sad but ended in a glorious victory.
