Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from bluerose675
This is beautiful and inspiring Jewell. It flows so well and the images are wonderful. I love this line "Come dance with me between the lines to music of our heart's designs". Well done!
Norma :)
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This is beautiful and inspiring Jewell. It flows so well and the images are wonderful. I love this line "Come dance with me between the lines to music of our heart's designs". Well done!
Norma :)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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Thanks, Norma! The last reviewer enjoyed those lines too. Interesting.
Comment from poetbear
This is just lovely and motivational.
It reads and flows well.
It makes sense and makes an impact.
Great image.
You wrote this so well.
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This is just lovely and motivational.
It reads and flows well.
It makes sense and makes an impact.
Great image.
You wrote this so well.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2011
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thank you, pb
Comment from Carolyn 12
Morning. I think this might be the first of your writings I have seen or seen in a long while. As I read your poem each stanza is capable of standing alone. My favorite is the last sing along hidden truths secrets. Thank you for sharing.
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Morning. I think this might be the first of your writings I have seen or seen in a long while. As I read your poem each stanza is capable of standing alone. My favorite is the last sing along hidden truths secrets. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
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Thanks for stopping in, Carolyn
Comment from Laurie Clayton
This is divinely lovely, Jewell.
It flows effortlessly down the page
and the combination of rhyming
couplets adds a delicate cadence
of thoughts and images.
A very worthy six.
Laurie
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This is divinely lovely, Jewell.
It flows effortlessly down the page
and the combination of rhyming
couplets adds a delicate cadence
of thoughts and images.
A very worthy six.
Laurie
Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
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You're a doll. Thanks my friend!
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My pleasure...:@))
Comment from G.B. Smith
i would love to be able to literally sing with you. Your voice is so lovely and in between the lines find that we are kindred spirits. I just published two new poems that I think you'll like, the last relates to you
Bear
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i would love to be able to literally sing with you. Your voice is so lovely and in between the lines find that we are kindred spirits. I just published two new poems that I think you'll like, the last relates to you
Bear
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2011
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Oh yay! Gotta go see!
thanks so mych, my friend. It's nice to have you back visiting again. :)