Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Gungalo
And what a beautiful song you have created. It's vibrant, it's fresh and it it full of life. A wonderful song to sing out and a beautiful topic.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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And what a beautiful song you have created. It's vibrant, it's fresh and it it full of life. A wonderful song to sing out and a beautiful topic.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thanks for the review, my freind.
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My pleasure.
Comment from BigTomNY
Great job my sweet friend!!!! i Love the flow and the structure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great story within the box!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Great job my sweet friend!!!! i Love the flow and the structure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great story within the box!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thanks!!!
Comment from mumsyone
Writer's block doesn't have a prayer against inspiration found in God's creations. Good poem, and I love the field of sunflowers. There are several fields of them around here.
to lovingly gift my Momma (momma--no cap when preceded by my).
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Writer's block doesn't have a prayer against inspiration found in God's creations. Good poem, and I love the field of sunflowers. There are several fields of them around here.
to lovingly gift my Momma (momma--no cap when preceded by my).
Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Ahhhh, thanks for heads up.
Comment from poetbear
You did well.
I think that things in boxes are overrated and that some special things in life can't be purchased in a store.
Lovely image, imagery,and metaphor.
Reads well and makes sense.
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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You did well.
I think that things in boxes are overrated and that some special things in life can't be purchased in a store.
Lovely image, imagery,and metaphor.
Reads well and makes sense.
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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Thanks
Comment from chita
Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your write-rhyme well-in your fifth stanza where you write(in autum's) should be "in autumn's"-in the same stanza where you write(to lovingly gift) I believe you meant to write "to loving give"-you have written a wonderful write which has some good thoughts philisophically speaking--to be good and let go of the bad thoughts--I am not taking a star away from you because I know how it is to have writers block and you have a well written write--good job.
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Your author notes are superb-you have good imagery and a good flow with your write-rhyme well-in your fifth stanza where you write(in autum's) should be "in autumn's"-in the same stanza where you write(to lovingly gift) I believe you meant to write "to loving give"-you have written a wonderful write which has some good thoughts philisophically speaking--to be good and let go of the bad thoughts--I am not taking a star away from you because I know how it is to have writers block and you have a well written write--good job.
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2011
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I'll fix. Thanks