Where Aqua Waters Flow
Serenity by the sea26 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn 12
Good Morning-I read your work and ejoyed it very much. THe picture does reflect your words perfectly.. I love the way your poem reads outloud and the image it invokes. Like you I love the ocean and it's sounds..
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Good Morning-I read your work and ejoyed it very much. THe picture does reflect your words perfectly.. I love the way your poem reads outloud and the image it invokes. Like you I love the ocean and it's sounds..
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi carolyn, I'm SO glad you enoyed my poem! My whole reason for writing is to bring a smile to someones day! Knowing I created a lovely image in your mind's eye is the greatest compliment you could give me. Thank you SO much! :o) Helvi
Comment from ernesto escarro
Where Aqua waters Flow
This is a story about a man who had visited the place,
where he knows the aqua flow
With the romantic story about him and his lover on
the shore have met experience with the river.
Wavelets striking the beach, caused a hurting part
as he remembers the past.
The sea was silent because of loneliness he feels.
Breathless as he remembered the pain of tragic
story.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Where Aqua waters Flow
This is a story about a man who had visited the place,
where he knows the aqua flow
With the romantic story about him and his lover on
the shore have met experience with the river.
Wavelets striking the beach, caused a hurting part
as he remembers the past.
The sea was silent because of loneliness he feels.
Breathless as he remembered the pain of tragic
story.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi Ernesto, I'm SO glad that my poem created a story within your mind's eye! Often the muse becomes a creative spirit just by hearing or reading a word or phrase, to know that I did that for you makes me VERY happy. Thank you for letting me see what your mind's eye saw! :o) Helvi
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Thanks for sharing then, I am grateful my review had seized your mind. God bless.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Helvi:)
This sounds like a fantasy place to me, but I'll admit when I sit by the quiet aqua sea, I can close my eyes and visualize a the very place you so elegantly describe in perfect Nonet format.
My two favorite places to write are by the sea shore, either quiet or raging and by a waterfall. Such places summon forth creative juices.
I wish you luck in the contest!
Roger aka Marilyn's writing partner
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi Helvi:)
This sounds like a fantasy place to me, but I'll admit when I sit by the quiet aqua sea, I can close my eyes and visualize a the very place you so elegantly describe in perfect Nonet format.
My two favorite places to write are by the sea shore, either quiet or raging and by a waterfall. Such places summon forth creative juices.
I wish you luck in the contest!
Roger aka Marilyn's writing partner
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi Roger, If you go to Bermuda you won't have to imagine those aqua waters. :o) There are lovely beaches with aqua waters there! Water seems to create a magical flow that calms your soul. I love, calm and raging seas as well as waterfalls, ponds and streams. I find GREAT creative spriit by them, but my favorite is the gentle aqua sea. Thank you for sharing your thoughts along with the wonderful review and wishes for the contest! Many Blessings! :o) Helvi
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Hi Helvi,
I studied marine biology in the aqua waters of Bermuda over fifty years ago and it seemas if I can remember evry wave and seashell of my first awesome visit. It changed my life forever.
Roger
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Hi Roger, I know what you mean! I treasure the moments I had in Bermuda! Even though it was quite a while ago, I remember well the beauty there. There is nothing like it! What a GREAT place for you to study marine biology! :o) Helvi
Comment from KinaSalad
What a lovely nonet, sounds so refreshing and a place I'd like to be. The beach is the place where you can heal your soul. I like the picture you selected as well. Thank you so much for sharing
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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What a lovely nonet, sounds so refreshing and a place I'd like to be. The beach is the place where you can heal your soul. I like the picture you selected as well. Thank you so much for sharing
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi KinaSalad, Thank you for the wonderful review! I know that I find the beach a VERY calming place to soothe youe mind. I always find joy there. I'm SO glad you enjoyed the poem. :o) Helvi
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your welcome
Comment from Pink Moon
Very lovely. Your poem and the painting compliment each other so well, I felt myself there walking on the beach. I agree, the sea is very soothing and calms the soul. I hope to enjoy more of your wonderful writing.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Very lovely. Your poem and the painting compliment each other so well, I felt myself there walking on the beach. I agree, the sea is very soothing and calms the soul. I hope to enjoy more of your wonderful writing.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi Pink Moon, I always hope the poems I write can place the reader in a beautiful place or create some tranquility for them. Your comments and incredible six star review tell me that I did that for you and I am VERY pleased! Thank you SO Much for the review and becoming a fan. You've left me with TWO gigantic smiles! Smiles and Hugs, Helvi
Comment from honeytree
The title is wonderful, the art work is beautiful.
I loved the very creative words written here with love.
Very enjoyable to read.
Honey tree
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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The title is wonderful, the art work is beautiful.
I loved the very creative words written here with love.
Very enjoyable to read.
Honey tree
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2011
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Hi Honeytree, Thank you for the wonderful review you gave my poem, "Where Aqua Waters Flow"! I am so glad you enjoyed it. :o) Helvi