My Little Muranos
the night life79 total reviews
Comment from rheabug
This is a beautiful presentation on this offering. I enjoyed reading this poem. The art work was beautiful and added a nice touch.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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This is a beautiful presentation on this offering. I enjoyed reading this poem. The art work was beautiful and added a nice touch.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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Thank you.
Comment from Ure Connection
Truthfully!
I dont know if I liked it or not. Or for that matter appreciate how it was written.
Yet something in there drew me on as a reader.
Not sure if I should be thankfull for that or afraid.lol.
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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Truthfully!
I dont know if I liked it or not. Or for that matter appreciate how it was written.
Yet something in there drew me on as a reader.
Not sure if I should be thankfull for that or afraid.lol.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2011
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Honesty continues to be more helpful than obligatory ratings. Thank you.
Comment from egmosley
Victor,
you have become victorious--your poem is very visual and you get four stars for the picture alone--I like this line:
Those legs
just scissorin'
and unscissorin' me.
Good a very good visual.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Victor,
you have become victorious--your poem is very visual and you get four stars for the picture alone--I like this line:
Those legs
just scissorin'
and unscissorin' me.
Good a very good visual.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Your too kind, but I like it. I love those lines as well, and naturally it's pleasing to see them work for people.
Comment from The Stranger
what I enjoyed most about this poem was the way the urgency crept in as the lady crossed and uncrossed her legs, I could feel the heat rising
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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what I enjoyed most about this poem was the way the urgency crept in as the lady crossed and uncrossed her legs, I could feel the heat rising
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Oh yes, torture takes many forms. Thank you.
Comment from Pili Pubul
I love your excellent version of "la dolce vita" , little muranos and crossed legs definitely described the environment to perfection LOL, bravo...
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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I love your excellent version of "la dolce vita" , little muranos and crossed legs definitely described the environment to perfection LOL, bravo...
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Oh my god you're right. It is "la dolce vita". Or we all wish it was.
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LOL , perhaps many do !
Comment from honeytree
Excellent art work and words
The words told so much within this bar
This glass fascinates me that really suited
the words written here.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Excellent art work and words
The words told so much within this bar
This glass fascinates me that really suited
the words written here.
Honey tree
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you Honey tree. And thanks for continuing to read me.
Comment from TammyGail
Lovely poem and yoiur picture is stunning - This part i loved "Those legs
just scissorin'
and unscissorin' me.
I love my lighted
little Muranos.
The fan turns
just enough heat." Wonderful poem
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Lovely poem and yoiur picture is stunning - This part i loved "Those legs
just scissorin'
and unscissorin' me.
I love my lighted
little Muranos.
The fan turns
just enough heat." Wonderful poem
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Tammy you just picked out the absolute heart of the poem, in my humble opinion. Thanks so much.
Comment from rchitwood
This is very good it takes reading your notes to figure out what they are.Now the poem becomes more believable.It has good structure and is very creative. The photo compliments your poem.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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This is very good it takes reading your notes to figure out what they are.Now the poem becomes more believable.It has good structure and is very creative. The photo compliments your poem.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you Rita. Yes, I posted it, then went back for explanatory notes. And I'm glad I did.
Comment from bluedragon776
Very interesting poetry because it has a nice interpretation of the general atmosphere of a bar or even night club. Interesting artwork.
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Very interesting poetry because it has a nice interpretation of the general atmosphere of a bar or even night club. Interesting artwork.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you Miss Blue Dragon.
Comment from Alexander E Poet
, Your beautiful words are well written rhyme and meaningful I thought this was an interesting, insightful short when a lot of imagery, I thought the picture was very compatible There were no errors. No typo's Alexander QQ
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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, Your beautiful words are well written rhyme and meaningful I thought this was an interesting, insightful short when a lot of imagery, I thought the picture was very compatible There were no errors. No typo's Alexander QQ
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2011
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Thank you Alexander.