Don't Fence Me In
A story of survival23 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
Excellent 'white picket fence' story. I love to see one who has been beaten down,learn how to standup for themselves.Very good layout,and storyline. Lot's of imagination.[I hope] Good characters.[except for Brad]
Very well written story.
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Excellent 'white picket fence' story. I love to see one who has been beaten down,learn how to standup for themselves.Very good layout,and storyline. Lot's of imagination.[I hope] Good characters.[except for Brad]
Very well written story.
Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for this great review and encouraging comments. I appreciate all the stars too. -Judy
Comment from anabellapongasi
Very nicely written fiction. You have used the idea of the white picket fence very well in this story. I never guessed what Cynthia's plan was all about until the divorce papers were served. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest:)
Anabella
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reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Very nicely written fiction. You have used the idea of the white picket fence very well in this story. I never guessed what Cynthia's plan was all about until the divorce papers were served. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest:)
Anabella
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Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you very much. It has been too long since I have written a story and I forgot how much fun it is. It is time for fun again. -Judy
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You're welcome. and welcome back!:)
Comment from Lostworld21
That was brilliant! The best White Picket Fence story I've come across yet. Loved the transformation of the girl. She wasn't like her friend, but she had her own awesome way of dealing with the situation. I know a woman who had a similar transformation recently, so this really really rang true. Thank you for writing it!Hope you do really well inthis contest!
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reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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That was brilliant! The best White Picket Fence story I've come across yet. Loved the transformation of the girl. She wasn't like her friend, but she had her own awesome way of dealing with the situation. I know a woman who had a similar transformation recently, so this really really rang true. Thank you for writing it!Hope you do really well inthis contest!
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Comment Written 04-May-2011
reply by the author on 04-May-2011
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I appreciate your taking the time to read it.l -Judy