Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Graceheart
You have delved deeply into that silent part of your soul, that soft, peaceful, endearing place. Serenity is there, waiting to relax you, reguvinate your spirit! You allow th reader to close their eyes and search their soul to find this same place! It is safe and warm there. Your images have provoked these feelings in me while I read your poem! Thank you for that!
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You have delved deeply into that silent part of your soul, that soft, peaceful, endearing place. Serenity is there, waiting to relax you, reguvinate your spirit! You allow th reader to close their eyes and search their soul to find this same place! It is safe and warm there. Your images have provoked these feelings in me while I read your poem! Thank you for that!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2004
Comment from Fat man Says
Fat Man Says... wonderful poem, after reading, for the third time, I caught myself taking my own inventory as to where I stand with my own "Serenity."
When poetry starts the reader thinking about who he is, where he's at, and what he has to give, that author is really a "Poet." FMS
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Fat Man Says... wonderful poem, after reading, for the third time, I caught myself taking my own inventory as to where I stand with my own "Serenity."
When poetry starts the reader thinking about who he is, where he's at, and what he has to give, that author is really a "Poet." FMS
Comment Written 15-Nov-2004
Comment from LScribeHarris
The beginning of this poem was shaky, and overall I think there were too many listing sections, but you brought it together in the end. The ending flowed a lot better and made more sense than the rest of it. I think with a little revising, this could be good. :) ~Scribe
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The beginning of this poem was shaky, and overall I think there were too many listing sections, but you brought it together in the end. The ending flowed a lot better and made more sense than the rest of it. I think with a little revising, this could be good. :) ~Scribe
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2004
Comment from Writermom
This is very true!
I have lived with it and without it.
I much prefer to live with it. - not much for profound thought this morning!
Great poem, the free form lends itself well to the message!!
Thanks!
Dawn
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This is very true!
I have lived with it and without it.
I much prefer to live with it. - not much for profound thought this morning!
Great poem, the free form lends itself well to the message!!
Thanks!
Dawn
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2004