Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Not until
my love can love
no more.

Beautifully penned an d full of awesome compassion and love. Your heart is huge girl and y9ur soul full of love for all!!!

I love that line above for the way it definitively promises to always remain a constant!!!!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011

Thanks...I was not even thinking these thoughts when they began to roll out. The whole time, I felt I was channeling....
I finished and got news of a young woman's death....
Sometimes the spiritual gifts are not my choice ...

reply by Gungalo on 03-Apr-2011

I'm always intrigued when things like this happen to me. It just seems they are meant to be girl!!!

Comment from Espresso momma

Excellent

That's what I want, to only go after that one day. When there is no more. I loved the way you put each line and I did feel it as meaningful. Thanks.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011

Thanks :)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great job writing this poem about the day time will take its toll but love will live on forever. i loved it...

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2011

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011

;) thank you