Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from frodo008
I was into it all the way to "loosed". I feel like the first part in my life all of the time. The feelings were brought home effectively. The last part was for someone else. "Loosed" came off as artsy to me. Just my opinion. Good luck to you.
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I was into it all the way to "loosed". I feel like the first part in my life all of the time. The feelings were brought home effectively. The last part was for someone else. "Loosed" came off as artsy to me. Just my opinion. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2004
