Out of My Hands
This poem tells the current state of my life28 total reviews
Comment from katz meow
Such a sad, emotionally charged poem, written with a great amount of talent.
"Someday we'll be together
Retiring with the Son"
There couldn't be a more beautiful, fulfilling way to end this poem. Before saying; "God is our certain future"-This poem overwhelms me! Sorry I don't have six stars left. I truly love this poem...katz meow
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Such a sad, emotionally charged poem, written with a great amount of talent.
"Someday we'll be together
Retiring with the Son"
There couldn't be a more beautiful, fulfilling way to end this poem. Before saying; "God is our certain future"-This poem overwhelms me! Sorry I don't have six stars left. I truly love this poem...katz meow
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Thank you, Katz meow. I really appreciate the wonderful review and your encouraging comments.
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You're so welcome.
Comment from moyramouse
Receiving a diagnosis of the big C is devastating. I nursed my father with this disease and I know how helpless you feel in its grip. You wrote with great honesty and sincerity. Your faith will carry you and His hands are there to help you through all you face. I send you my prayers. x moyramouse
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Receiving a diagnosis of the big C is devastating. I nursed my father with this disease and I know how helpless you feel in its grip. You wrote with great honesty and sincerity. Your faith will carry you and His hands are there to help you through all you face. I send you my prayers. x moyramouse
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Thank you for the great review and kind comments of encouragement.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
You have my profound sympathy for what you are going through. I have watched this happen with someone I loved (and love yet) dearly. I'm glad you count on God's comfort, for I know how profound that can be. My best to you, Jeanie Mercer
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You have my profound sympathy for what you are going through. I have watched this happen with someone I loved (and love yet) dearly. I'm glad you count on God's comfort, for I know how profound that can be. My best to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Thank you so much Jeanie. Your kind words and encouragement lift my spirits.
Comment from RebelRose
This is so sad but also, so hopeful. Sad that you may be losing your life's partner, but hopeful that God will answer prayer and that you will have the strength to deal with His decision. It is beautiful that you have Faith to sustain you both.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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This is so sad but also, so hopeful. Sad that you may be losing your life's partner, but hopeful that God will answer prayer and that you will have the strength to deal with His decision. It is beautiful that you have Faith to sustain you both.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review and loving comments.
Comment from aduncan1284
Wow... This poem is amazing. I am deeply touched by your courage and you belief. I am humbled and I'm in tears. God is great indeed. Thank you very much for sharing.
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Wow... This poem is amazing. I am deeply touched by your courage and you belief. I am humbled and I'm in tears. God is great indeed. Thank you very much for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Oh, my, how humbling to receive this review. You have made me smile today. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from bluetwo
I certainly felt your emotions expressed here. I felt the rhyme was a bit forced at times, as:
So now we pray for healing
Knowing God can do just that
We live each day believing
His will is never flat
The "that"/"flat" rhyme didn't do your work justice. I don't think most people feel God's will can be "flat".
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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I certainly felt your emotions expressed here. I felt the rhyme was a bit forced at times, as:
So now we pray for healing
Knowing God can do just that
We live each day believing
His will is never flat
The "that"/"flat" rhyme didn't do your work justice. I don't think most people feel God's will can be "flat".
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Exactly, never flat. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from markk
My goodness, so sad and so moving. A wonderful piece and extremely touching. I enjoyed it very much and found your piece to be sad and yet uplifting with faith. I wish you both the very best possible.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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My goodness, so sad and so moving. A wonderful piece and extremely touching. I enjoyed it very much and found your piece to be sad and yet uplifting with faith. I wish you both the very best possible.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review and great comments.
Comment from Magics02
This poem really hit me this morning and it is a sad poem but also one of reverance and hope for eternal life. I pray your burden and pains are lessened today and the many days ahead. Blessings to you and the family and a very emotional write this was for me.
God Bless You
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This poem really hit me this morning and it is a sad poem but also one of reverance and hope for eternal life. I pray your burden and pains are lessened today and the many days ahead. Blessings to you and the family and a very emotional write this was for me.
God Bless You
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Comment Written 29-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2011
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Thank you for review and for the wonderful comments. It sounds like your heart is heavy as well. God Bless you also.
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It is and you are so welcome. It is in reading and writing our hands and hearts do mend.