Late Night Musing
My grandmother, if alive, would be 111 tomorrow.62 total reviews
Comment from Soledadpaz
My God, Bill. How did a sweet simple fellow like you end up with a harridan like that? Sorry but that's how I read her. How wonderful you were there for your grandmother, but it's even more wonderful that she was there for you. Nowadays, most kids don't get that, the families are so far flung. I love how you got out of being blamed for the gun going off. That was priceless!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
  |
My God, Bill. How did a sweet simple fellow like you end up with a harridan like that? Sorry but that's how I read her. How wonderful you were there for your grandmother, but it's even more wonderful that she was there for you. Nowadays, most kids don't get that, the families are so far flung. I love how you got out of being blamed for the gun going off. That was priceless!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2011
-
Thanks for reading and your kind feedback. All I can tell you about the ex was that at the time this took place, she was not the girl I married. People change. God always has a plan. Soon after this time, I met my current wife, the love of my life. Warm regards, Bill
Comment from Korton
Terrific story Bill. You've done a splendid job of crafting this chronical to which many of us can relate. There aren't too many who realize that there are many things far more valuable than money and holdings. It sounds like your ex worked hard receiving the station which she so richly deserved. Very well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
 |
Terrific story Bill. You've done a splendid job of crafting this chronical to which many of us can relate. There aren't too many who realize that there are many things far more valuable than money and holdings. It sounds like your ex worked hard receiving the station which she so richly deserved. Very well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
-
Thank you for reading and your kind words. We get so few sixes, it is always greatly appreciated. Warm regards, Bill
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
bhogg:
some people just don't get it -- and, unfortunately,
for them, they never will -- their loss, not yours!
I am amazed that all your brothers and sisters agreed
on that -- it's highly unusual that at least one doesn't
through a cog in something like that -- I'm so proud
of all of you
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
|
bhogg:
some people just don't get it -- and, unfortunately,
for them, they never will -- their loss, not yours!
I am amazed that all your brothers and sisters agreed
on that -- it's highly unusual that at least one doesn't
through a cog in something like that -- I'm so proud
of all of you
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 20-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2011
-
Thanks for reading Jan and your kind feedback. Two of my brothers really needed the money at the time. They delayed about 30 seconds. Warm regards, Bill
Comment from mmmichelle34
That was a very nice peace of work you have a great way of writing and making someone see a picture as you read that was great work hope to see more...
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
|
That was a very nice peace of work you have a great way of writing and making someone see a picture as you read that was great work hope to see more...
Comment Written 19-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
-
Thanks Michelle. I'm glad that your read and thanks for the kind feedback.
Comment from bookishfabler
My God, son, what's the good news?"
"Oh, she thought I was you."
LOL, I love it!
What an absolutely lovely tribute to your grandmother. I hope she can seethis from her place in Heaven.
hugs book
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
|
My God, son, what's the good news?"
"Oh, she thought I was you."
LOL, I love it!
What an absolutely lovely tribute to your grandmother. I hope she can seethis from her place in Heaven.
hugs book
Comment Written 19-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
-
Thanks for reading and your kind feedback! Regards, Bill
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Outstandingly written. One nit: I believe the legal term it "quit claim". You've described the role of caregiver perfectly. It's a shame you got so little understanding at home ("if you won't help, at least don't hinder" comes to mind). By the way, the contributing factor in the failure of your marriage was your ex-wife's lack of empathy--a character flaw--not your grandmother's last days. Your memories are indeed a treasure without price. Nancy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
|
Outstandingly written. One nit: I believe the legal term it "quit claim". You've described the role of caregiver perfectly. It's a shame you got so little understanding at home ("if you won't help, at least don't hinder" comes to mind). By the way, the contributing factor in the failure of your marriage was your ex-wife's lack of empathy--a character flaw--not your grandmother's last days. Your memories are indeed a treasure without price. Nancy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
-
Thanks for reading Nancy and the compliment of a six. I'll check out the legal term, so much appreciate your spot. Warm regards, Bill
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
A nice essay.
Heartfelt.
Interesting.
A nice tribute to your grandmother.
I like the photo too.
Good title.
I love the ending.
Kathryn
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
|
A nice essay.
Heartfelt.
Interesting.
A nice tribute to your grandmother.
I like the photo too.
Good title.
I love the ending.
Kathryn
Comment Written 18-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
-
Thanks for reading Kathryn and for your generous feedback! Regards, Bill
-
You're welcome Bill
Regards,
Kathryn
Comment from animatqua
This is wonderful. You brought me right into your memories with you and made me experience them, too. you are a delightful writer, my friend, and I always enjoy your work.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
|
This is wonderful. You brought me right into your memories with you and made me experience them, too. you are a delightful writer, my friend, and I always enjoy your work.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2011
-
Thanks for reading and your kind and generous feedback. We get so few sixes, that I'm always humbled to get one. Warm regards, Bill
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A lifetime of memories. (This is what it is all about.)
I am appauled that your x-wife didn't understand about your grandmother. I am one of those people who hate to see out elderly put on a shelf and wait for them to die. They are too precious and we need to listen to their wisdom.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
|
A lifetime of memories. (This is what it is all about.)
I am appauled that your x-wife didn't understand about your grandmother. I am one of those people who hate to see out elderly put on a shelf and wait for them to die. They are too precious and we need to listen to their wisdom.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
-
Hi Barbara - thank you so much for reading and your kind feedback! Always warm regards, Bill
Comment from Veekz
My goodness! Your ex sounds horrible! No wonder she's your ex. Karma is a cruel mistress though so she should be careful because it is going to come back on her. On the other hand your Grandmother sounds absolutely charming! :) The way you describe her is great, I can picture this feisty woman with a heart of gold as she shows you where to find arrow heads, very cool :)
Thanks for sharing and for the well written read :)
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
|
My goodness! Your ex sounds horrible! No wonder she's your ex. Karma is a cruel mistress though so she should be careful because it is going to come back on her. On the other hand your Grandmother sounds absolutely charming! :) The way you describe her is great, I can picture this feisty woman with a heart of gold as she shows you where to find arrow heads, very cool :)
Thanks for sharing and for the well written read :)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2011
-
I very much appreciate you reading and for you kind comments.
