Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Love is a Mystery"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from pugrpoems
Beautiful artwork and wonderful piece. It's slightly short, but delivers a timely message. Great job!! Excellent flow and rhymeing scheme. I like it. keep up the good work. pugrpoems.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Beautiful artwork and wonderful piece. It's slightly short, but delivers a timely message. Great job!! Excellent flow and rhymeing scheme. I like it. keep up the good work. pugrpoems.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2010
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Thank you for wonderful review, so detailed and informative. Really appreciate it.
Comment from Tanya Ko
You make me feel in surround in love.
I love your poem because it is deliver pure love.
You make me speechless through this poem
English is my second language too
I love to be your fan and follower
That's how much I like this poem-thank you
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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You make me feel in surround in love.
I love your poem because it is deliver pure love.
You make me speechless through this poem
English is my second language too
I love to be your fan and follower
That's how much I like this poem-thank you
Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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Thank you Tanya Ko for your marvellous review and it thrills my soul to hear you found in my poem pure love!
Comment from ErikAHarris
This is a really well done. It almost is a six, just short, one more stanza might have convinced me, givin it would have been on the same par as the current ones.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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This is a really well done. It almost is a six, just short, one more stanza might have convinced me, givin it would have been on the same par as the current ones.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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Thank you TyrantsPein for your compliment on the six stars, a very good idea you wrote, something I would like to do! Thank you!
Comment from Valkarie
This is a wonderful poem which flows so well is concise and has that expressive and artistic emotional descriptive overview which is so inspiring. The complexity of your poem is impeccable and captures the tension of the piece. With a good rhyming and rhythm this poem is so artistic in expression which gives it that most creative dialogue.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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This is a wonderful poem which flows so well is concise and has that expressive and artistic emotional descriptive overview which is so inspiring. The complexity of your poem is impeccable and captures the tension of the piece. With a good rhyming and rhythm this poem is so artistic in expression which gives it that most creative dialogue.
valkarie...
Comment Written 12-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2010
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hank you Valkarie for the wonderful review you gave me on my poem, really awesome! Really appreciate it.
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sarahice...I really enjoyed your piece. V...
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Glad you did!
Comment from CodyJack
I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem and the way it rhymes in different places than usual. It makes it perfect. What you say about love is so true. This was much enjoyed and has a lot of imagery. Cody
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem and the way it rhymes in different places than usual. It makes it perfect. What you say about love is so true. This was much enjoyed and has a lot of imagery. Cody
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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Thank you Cody for your encouraging review, makes me very happy!
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Glad you like my poems, thank you for your helpful reviews. Best regards, Sarah
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
Wonderful! The elements used with this subject of love capture the uplifted spirit of graceful repose. I like the fast moving pace! I felt the meter worked to capture an ever evolving tempo. The line "looking at mine' possibly could have been served better "feeding rapture' found in mine. Otherwise the poem sings with exuberant joy.
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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Wonderful! The elements used with this subject of love capture the uplifted spirit of graceful repose. I like the fast moving pace! I felt the meter worked to capture an ever evolving tempo. The line "looking at mine' possibly could have been served better "feeding rapture' found in mine. Otherwise the poem sings with exuberant joy.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2010
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Thank you for pointing this out for me, I kind of felt it too, so this is true!
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Great. Beautiful expression in verse.
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Thank you for your reply back! I replaced your suggestion in my poem instead. Hope it fits well. Love Sarah
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You're a real doll. I'm glad you were able to use the suggestion. Your new friend.