Summer's Canvas
A sketch of summer through my eyes35 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great haiku about the colors of summer, i enjoyed reading this very much and i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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this is very well written with good form and good flow, a great haiku about the colors of summer, i enjoyed reading this very much and i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 30-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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I thank you so much sweetwoodjax - I'm glad you liked my little summer haiku and appreciate your kind comments and good wishes. Sandy
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I thank you so much sweetwoodjax - I'm glad you liked my little summer haiku and appreciate your kind comments and good wishes. Sandy
Comment from Jen Gentry
excellent contest entry. I enjoyed it. It brings to the mind the colors of summer provoking memories of long sunsets and sweet summer love. Thanks for the trip even if it was only in my mind good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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excellent contest entry. I enjoyed it. It brings to the mind the colors of summer provoking memories of long sunsets and sweet summer love. Thanks for the trip even if it was only in my mind good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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dear Christa - I thank you so much for your kind words and good wishes. I'm glad I was able to take you back in time, if only for a few minutes. :-) Thanks again. Sandy
Comment from Belinda
Hi, WerdNerd, you've got me thinking: which speaks to me more, the artwork or the haiku? This is so lovely, my friend, a perfect juxtaposition of a pure admiration to summer's beauty and the canvas that captures the beauty.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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Hi, WerdNerd, you've got me thinking: which speaks to me more, the artwork or the haiku? This is so lovely, my friend, a perfect juxtaposition of a pure admiration to summer's beauty and the canvas that captures the beauty.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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dear Belinda, I felt the same way about the artwork as soon as I saw it - it's beautiful and fit the words perfectly I thought. I'm so glad you liked this and appreciate your kind words very much.
Comment from Fireshadow
WerdNerd, this is an excellent entry for the Haiku contest for it certainly paints an image in the reader's mind. I feel it will be a strong contender in the contest and wish you good luck for a win. Very well done, my friend.
Amarillys
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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WerdNerd, this is an excellent entry for the Haiku contest for it certainly paints an image in the reader's mind. I feel it will be a strong contender in the contest and wish you good luck for a win. Very well done, my friend.
Amarillys
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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Amarillys - I thank you kindly for your thoughtful and sweet comments and for your encouragement. Sandy
Comment from AnnaLinda
WerdNerd,
This really is a fantastic haiku in my opinion!
I enjoyed the alliteration in the first line
the internal rhyme in the middle line is just
fine by me and brushstrokes of summer is a
flaming finish!
You also have a beautifully matching persention,
Linda
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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WerdNerd,
This really is a fantastic haiku in my opinion!
I enjoyed the alliteration in the first line
the internal rhyme in the middle line is just
fine by me and brushstrokes of summer is a
flaming finish!
You also have a beautifully matching persention,
Linda
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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dear Linda - thank you SO much - I love reading your work and your opinion means a lot to me. So glad you enjoyed and thanks for your encouragement. Sandy
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My pleasure Sandy,
Linda
Comment from Magics02
Bright is the light you show in this write:) I really liked this short but beautiful scenery you gave me as I read this one. Great job poet:)
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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Bright is the light you show in this write:) I really liked this short but beautiful scenery you gave me as I read this one. Great job poet:)
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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oh thanks so much Magics02 - I'm so glad you enjoyed this one and appreciate your taking time to read and comment. Thank you again. Sandy
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You are so welcome and nice to meet you:)
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Thanks and so nice to meet you too!! Sandy
Comment from keimosobie
very nice. you painted a pretty picture of summer. pastel dreams and turquoise blues and golden hues. yes i guess if you painted summer those are the colors one would use.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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very nice. you painted a pretty picture of summer. pastel dreams and turquoise blues and golden hues. yes i guess if you painted summer those are the colors one would use.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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dear keimosobie - thanks so much for your kind comments - I'm very glad you enjoyed my little summertime haiku. Sandy
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
perfect pastel dreams
turquoise blues and golden hues
brushstrokes of summer [[ a good haiku, nice imagery and commendable metaphors are used. Loved it]]
K
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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perfect pastel dreams
turquoise blues and golden hues
brushstrokes of summer [[ a good haiku, nice imagery and commendable metaphors are used. Loved it]]
K
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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dear K - thank you very much for taking time to read my haiku and for your kind comments. Much appreciated. Sandy
Comment from rosah
brushstrokes of summer, such a delightful haiku, fits perfectly with the artwork you've chosen, just lovely, thank you for sharing, peace be with you.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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brushstrokes of summer, such a delightful haiku, fits perfectly with the artwork you've chosen, just lovely, thank you for sharing, peace be with you.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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dear rosah - I'm so very glad that you enjoyed my little haiku - and I agree - the artwork was amazing. Appreciate your kind words. Sandy
Comment from heyjude
werdnerd, this is lovely. There are beautiful colors
associated with the summer. Sunsets that are gorgeous.
I like ... perfect pastel dreams. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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werdnerd, this is lovely. There are beautiful colors
associated with the summer. Sunsets that are gorgeous.
I like ... perfect pastel dreams. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2010
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dear heyjude (LOVE your name by the way) I thank you so much for reading and for your very kind comments and good wishes, they are much appreciated. Sandy