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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "tanka (autumn turns to winter)"keep your hope alive....
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Comment from L Stout
sweet poem well done keeping to limiting form interesting topic good flow quite lyrical I particularly liked the last part, my favourite line was through branches bared, bent like arms
waving a rainbow of hope although I also liked your reference to tears
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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sweet poem well done keeping to limiting form interesting topic good flow quite lyrical I particularly liked the last part, my favourite line was through branches bared, bent like arms
waving a rainbow of hope although I also liked your reference to tears
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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thanx fragorl! :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello shelley,
I like your vivid picture and imagination about how changes to winter
I say an excellent entry.
good luck
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2010
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Hello shelley,
I like your vivid picture and imagination about how changes to winter
I say an excellent entry.
good luck
Gert
Comment Written 22-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2010
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thankya! :-)
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smiles
Gert
Comment from Pili Pubul
Terrific tanka, I love very much the very poetic images you created. Good luck in the contest.
through branches bared, bent like arms
waving a rainbow of hope
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2010
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Terrific tanka, I love very much the very poetic images you created. Good luck in the contest.
through branches bared, bent like arms
waving a rainbow of hope
Comment Written 21-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2010
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thanx pili! :)
Comment from Sasha
This is truly lovely. A wonderful description of autumn turning into winter. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. I especially like the lines, winter's affect blows through branches bared, bent like arms
waving a rainbow of hope...very nice work with this one.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2010
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This is truly lovely. A wonderful description of autumn turning into winter. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. I especially like the lines, winter's affect blows through branches bared, bent like arms
waving a rainbow of hope...very nice work with this one.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2010
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thanx smurphette! :)
Comment from chita
You have a good flow with your poem and write with emotion about how leaves falls like tears in autumn and winter blows through bare branches giving a rainbow of hope--great job.
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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You have a good flow with your poem and write with emotion about how leaves falls like tears in autumn and winter blows through bare branches giving a rainbow of hope--great job.
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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thank you chita :)
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You're welcome:))
Comment from Swtdreamz
I like how leaves fall like tears in autumn's chilly breath.
I can imagine the sky blowing out white puffs of smoke against a rain of crackling leaves.
Good imagery.
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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I like how leaves fall like tears in autumn's chilly breath.
I can imagine the sky blowing out white puffs of smoke against a rain of crackling leaves.
Good imagery.
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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hehe thanx dreamz! :)