Redemption
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Awakening"One Man's Return From Hell
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Comment from Soledadpaz
A great beginning and a terrible story about the loss Dax has suffered and will never be able to put behind him, the loss of a child. Not sure if he lost his wife as well. A very interesting read.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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A great beginning and a terrible story about the loss Dax has suffered and will never be able to put behind him, the loss of a child. Not sure if he lost his wife as well. A very interesting read.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Yes - he lost his wife as well. It it was unclear to you, I will definitely take a look at that segment. I very much appreciate you reading and for your feedback. I hope that you have read the first chapter :)
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You say they shot her, but you can survive that. I was hoping.
Comment from lucyanne1977
A lovely read I enjoyed it very much. I found nothing wrong with it at all. I t was easy to read and it spoke to me. well done.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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A lovely read I enjoyed it very much. I found nothing wrong with it at all. I t was easy to read and it spoke to me. well done.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Thank you very much. I know there are no "rewards" to read chapter one, but it would make more sense if you did. I appreciate you reading and your kind words.