Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Life's Lessons 101"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
38 total reviews
Comment from RKagan
This peice is cute, clever and lots of fun. We all love the excuse of eating for two I guess. It just always seems like the baby wnats all these fatening things, now whats that about? LOL Great poem
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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This peice is cute, clever and lots of fun. We all love the excuse of eating for two I guess. It just always seems like the baby wnats all these fatening things, now whats that about? LOL Great poem
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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RKagan,
Thanks for reading my short story and for the kind words. My time is so limited lately, but I felt the need to share soemthing. Your kindness is my reward. Smiles, Carol
Comment from dmjones
Hi Carol, I enjoyed reading this little piece. It brought back memories. I used to talk to my babies before they were born. A good twist at the end.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Hi Carol, I enjoyed reading this little piece. It brought back memories. I used to talk to my babies before they were born. A good twist at the end.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Donna,
I remember playing music and chattering away. I sometimes wonder why they tune me out now. LOL
Smiles, CArol
Comment from hotstuff
How lovely your story is. I think any pregnant mother (indeed, all mothers) will relate to this so well.
I smiled as I read your story as it brought back my own memories.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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How lovely your story is. I think any pregnant mother (indeed, all mothers) will relate to this so well.
I smiled as I read your story as it brought back my own memories.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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hotstuff,
I needed a good though last night and this memory popped into my head. Glad you enjoyed it too! Smiles, CArol
Comment from misscookie
When I saw the lovely artwork I smiled knowing it would be a sweet and dearing poem
I wasorrect your words have been repeated all over the world befor and after the baby comes. this is a good write.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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When I saw the lovely artwork I smiled knowing it would be a sweet and dearing poem
I wasorrect your words have been repeated all over the world befor and after the baby comes. this is a good write.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Cookie,
I needed something calm and reassuring last night and motherhood seemed to fit the bill. Thanks..Carol
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You did a wonderful job and congraulation on the home page.
Comment from gramalot8
Begin Again, this was a very sweet enjoyable quick read. I enjoyed the idea of "feeding" Jack. You show great imagination and wit. Good job.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Begin Again, this was a very sweet enjoyable quick read. I enjoyed the idea of "feeding" Jack. You show great imagination and wit. Good job.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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gramalot,
Thanks for enjoying my short story and for the kind comments. I truly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Carol,
This is a delightful read and one I enjoyed reading. Of course the only thing to do is buy another box...we don't want Jack to go hungry! Well done. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Hi Carol,
This is a delightful read and one I enjoyed reading. Of course the only thing to do is buy another box...we don't want Jack to go hungry! Well done. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Chey,
Weary from the past few weeks, I needed something calm and endearing to write about..motherhood seemed to fit the bill and sweet animal crackers didn't hurt either. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from melyuki
hey sis now that was cute. maybe rig has the same funny momenets too... a lovely refreshing little ode about mum's to be and their precious babies... now dont tell me all this mania in your life has given you the clucky feeling again.. I know i did introduce you to chooks , but that would be just crazy... great little number sis. lots of hugs and luv from littler sis. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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hey sis now that was cute. maybe rig has the same funny momenets too... a lovely refreshing little ode about mum's to be and their precious babies... now dont tell me all this mania in your life has given you the clucky feeling again.. I know i did introduce you to chooks , but that would be just crazy... great little number sis. lots of hugs and luv from littler sis. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Sis,
No chooks for me unless they are related to Colonel Sanders..KFC drumsticks. LOL Thanks for the kind words and of course all the love. Smiles, Sis
Comment from fionageorge
Hi Nora, thank you so much for sharing the flash fiction. I notice you have selected one of Suneagle's selections, but not entered this one in the contest. I really enjoyed this short read, and imagined the pregnant woman promising to buy some more for 'Jack'!
Warmest regards, and hugs, Marijke
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Hi Nora, thank you so much for sharing the flash fiction. I notice you have selected one of Suneagle's selections, but not entered this one in the contest. I really enjoyed this short read, and imagined the pregnant woman promising to buy some more for 'Jack'!
Warmest regards, and hugs, Marijke
Comment Written 19-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Marijke,
Hey..I haven[t been gone that long have I? You forgot my name...just kidding..I do the same thing when my mind gets ahead of myself. You can call me anything...I accept the kind words and thoughts...Smiles, Carol
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Whoopsie - I am having a blond day today, my friend. My appologies, Carol. I would never forget you, my friend. As I said, I am blond! Cheers, Mar .... who? Oh, yes, Marijke LOL :o)
Comment from Belinda
Ha-ha, eating for two... This is what pregnant women like to say, when they want more of something delicious. I wonder if there's a physical explanation for this, or for other cravings. Witty you, Carol ...
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Ha-ha, eating for two... This is what pregnant women like to say, when they want more of something delicious. I wonder if there's a physical explanation for this, or for other cravings. Witty you, Carol ...
Comment Written 18-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Belinda,
What ever works..bring on the chocolate or whatever sweet morsel one can find. LOL Thank you...Carol
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
LOL- I enjoyed this, and the picture you've selected is perfect! How cute that you talk to 'Jack'' (I'm assuming that's the baby inside?) as you tell a little story eating each animal cracker- LOL- Yes, you are eating for two, so you can eat the whole box. LOL- I used to love those little animal crackers! Thanks for sharing- Betty
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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LOL- I enjoyed this, and the picture you've selected is perfect! How cute that you talk to 'Jack'' (I'm assuming that's the baby inside?) as you tell a little story eating each animal cracker- LOL- Yes, you are eating for two, so you can eat the whole box. LOL- I used to love those little animal crackers! Thanks for sharing- Betty
Comment Written 18-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2010
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Betty,
I was searching for a calm moment last night and this little story (Memory) popped into mind. Glad you enjoyed. Smiles, Carol
