Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Chow Time"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
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Comment from patwannabe
Carol, I like it. One thing I've learned since I've been with Fanstory is that it doesn't have to be long to be good or fun. I'm gettng more enamored with Flash Fiction. Maybe it's because I don't like to waste words.
I love the "well hidden" dog pic. He even looks devious, doesn't he.
Well done, as usual. Always love your posts, pat
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Carol, I like it. One thing I've learned since I've been with Fanstory is that it doesn't have to be long to be good or fun. I'm gettng more enamored with Flash Fiction. Maybe it's because I don't like to waste words.
I love the "well hidden" dog pic. He even looks devious, doesn't he.
Well done, as usual. Always love your posts, pat
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Carol ...
This is sure to bring a smile to all of your readers and, after all, who could blame the Dog if the aroma was so tempting?
Thank you for sharing this with us and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
Love from .. Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Hullo Carol ...
This is sure to bring a smile to all of your readers and, after all, who could blame the Dog if the aroma was so tempting?
Thank you for sharing this with us and, as it is a Contest entry, I wish you well.
Love from .. Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from adewpearl
I was beginning to wonder where the conflict was going to come from since the sisters were being so chummy and helpful to each other despite each one's desire to win the contest, and then the hungry dog entered the picture. LOL I guess he resolved any problem as to which one would win. ;-) This is funny, Carol. Good twist ending. Brooke
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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I was beginning to wonder where the conflict was going to come from since the sisters were being so chummy and helpful to each other despite each one's desire to win the contest, and then the hungry dog entered the picture. LOL I guess he resolved any problem as to which one would win. ;-) This is funny, Carol. Good twist ending. Brooke
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Carol,
As I began to read this I was afraid the dog would find a feast! A humorous and fun story...glad you are back. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Hi Carol,
As I began to read this I was afraid the dog would find a feast! A humorous and fun story...glad you are back. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from misscookie
I love the photo
It tells it all
I love the short story, I think it is not only funny and light I think children would love it too.
Some thing like this happen with our family dog, but i just can't remember what she got.
this is a good write.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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I love the photo
It tells it all
I love the short story, I think it is not only funny and light I think children would love it too.
Some thing like this happen with our family dog, but i just can't remember what she got.
this is a good write.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
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I love everything you write and you are welcopme.
Comment from Trybuck
Sounds like a devious dog or a hungry man in disguise
Poor girls seem to have lost their award winning pies
Are there never any happy ending stories anymore?
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Sounds like a devious dog or a hungry man in disguise
Poor girls seem to have lost their award winning pies
Are there never any happy ending stories anymore?
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from jadapenn
This was a priceless essay of opportunity seized. There is always someone slinking around with a growling stomach and any chance is grabbed. Shame so one twin lost out while Buster crawled in under a bush and went to sleep. You brought a smile to my face.
Well done. luv jada
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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This was a priceless essay of opportunity seized. There is always someone slinking around with a growling stomach and any chance is grabbed. Shame so one twin lost out while Buster crawled in under a bush and went to sleep. You brought a smile to my face.
Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from Jnetgame
I enjoyed this microfiction story. That certain was devious of Karrie to leave the door ajar. I did notice one extra ? in this sentence:
"I'll help you clear a space in the car for them?"
Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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I enjoyed this microfiction story. That certain was devious of Karrie to leave the door ajar. I did notice one extra ? in this sentence:
"I'll help you clear a space in the car for them?"
Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
As a mother of boys, it wouldn't have to be a canine intruder. Whatever I am baking, never has a chance to cool before it's devoured. Although, have two large dogs, a black lab and a great pyrenees, that are capable of devouring food also. I enjoyed your flas fiction story.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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As a mother of boys, it wouldn't have to be a canine intruder. Whatever I am baking, never has a chance to cool before it's devoured. Although, have two large dogs, a black lab and a great pyrenees, that are capable of devouring food also. I enjoyed your flas fiction story.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
Comment from Southern Writer
Bad, bad sister!. Smart, smart, sister.
I admire those of you who can tell a story in 6 words (LOL) OK, a few more than that, but you do make each word count.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Bad, bad sister!. Smart, smart, sister.
I admire those of you who can tell a story in 6 words (LOL) OK, a few more than that, but you do make each word count.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for enjoying my short little story. It was a fun one to write. Smiles to you....Carol
