Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

Very creative, and sounds like a normal conversation. It was resourceful to have avoided the words "submarine sandwich" in a hoagie shop. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2010

Jeanie... thank you for reading and taking the time to positively comment...

Comment from gramalot8

Excellent

Cute fun story. Very fun to read. Great imagery. You met the challenge in a unique fun way. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed it a lot.

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 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010

gramalot8.. thank you for taking the time to read and writa a positive comment. I really need that today... ?????

Comment from Jnetgame

Excellent

Great job on this story without the letter s. I did notice one minor word to edit; tomatoe should be tomato. Other than that, it looks good(and it's making me hungry). Good luck!

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 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010

Jnet... thank you for the comment and I already made the change. Not my best work, but an effort all the less. Again, thank you...