Belated Gratitude
A poem strictly for the birds.25 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
Nicely done on a challenge of this sort. The words were well chosen for the poem. The rhyming pattern was not forced and as I said, nor were the words.
Good luck in the contest...
John
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Nicely done on a challenge of this sort. The words were well chosen for the poem. The rhyming pattern was not forced and as I said, nor were the words.
Good luck in the contest...
John
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much John. I truly appreciate these nice comments from you, and the good wishes too.
Comment from adewpearl
Your delightful quatrains have a lilting flow, strong ABAB rhyming, excellent alliteration and a fanciful message, and all without employing a single letter S - a sweet entry in this contest :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Your delightful quatrains have a lilting flow, strong ABAB rhyming, excellent alliteration and a fanciful message, and all without employing a single letter S - a sweet entry in this contest :-) Brooke
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Your kind review of my 's-less' poem is sweet, too, Brooke. Thank you for commenting so thoughtfully on its 'ingredients.' I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from ceshorses
I thought this was a really cute poem but I wasnt inspired by it. I thought the message was cute and the rhyme was well written but after I read it I was ready to move on to something else. However the more I read it the more I liked it.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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I thought this was a really cute poem but I wasnt inspired by it. I thought the message was cute and the rhyme was well written but after I read it I was ready to move on to something else. However the more I read it the more I liked it.
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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I appreciate your thoughtful review of my poem. I do hope you were able to find something a little more inspiring as you "moved on." I'm thankful that you took time to comment. Hugs from 8^] (blind poet)
Comment from RebelRose
You did a great job with this. It looks easy but I'll bet it's not. Very well done with good rhyming scheme and rhythm. Good entry for the writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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You did a great job with this. It looks easy but I'll bet it's not. Very well done with good rhyming scheme and rhythm. Good entry for the writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Thank you so much for your kind review of this 'for the birds' poem. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from rama devi
Lovely little ditty for a bitty little bird!
Good flow, rhyming and absence of S sounds!
No nits.
best of luck!
Warmly,y rd
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Lovely little ditty for a bitty little bird!
Good flow, rhyming and absence of S sounds!
No nits.
best of luck!
Warmly,y rd
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Comment Written 07-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
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Well... I'm tempted to review your adorable review, rd. I guess creative people just can't help being creative, right? Thank you for honoring my poem with your kind and clever comments. They are much appreciated. : )
