POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Blue Danube
Hello Carol:
This is a wonderful tetractys because in few syllables it conveys the enormous and great possibilities for overcoming barriers between human beings.
The simple (and caring) act of holding another person's hand, really listening, etc. can bring positive change and influence into lives and the world as a whole.
Beautiful presentation too.
Blue
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Hello Carol:
This is a wonderful tetractys because in few syllables it conveys the enormous and great possibilities for overcoming barriers between human beings.
The simple (and caring) act of holding another person's hand, really listening, etc. can bring positive change and influence into lives and the world as a whole.
Beautiful presentation too.
Blue
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Blue
I am so pleased that you connected with my poem and saw what I was trying to say. Thank you so much. Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome, Carol.
Smiles back to you,
Blue
Comment from missy98writer
Carol,
In so few words you've written an beautiful poem. They say two hearts work better than one. I like your art work. An excellent poem for the Tetracty contest. The last two lines I loved:
Take hold my hand,
Together, let's expand our boundaries
Your poem reminds me of a great Proverb. "The world is my oyster" and now "let's expand our boundaries."
Melissa.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Carol,
In so few words you've written an beautiful poem. They say two hearts work better than one. I like your art work. An excellent poem for the Tetracty contest. The last two lines I loved:
Take hold my hand,
Together, let's expand our boundaries
Your poem reminds me of a great Proverb. "The world is my oyster" and now "let's expand our boundaries."
Melissa.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2010
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Melissa,
Thanks so much to connecting with my little poem. I appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from jadapenn
I'll take your hand, Carol and lets expand our boundaries. Mind you, I love your tetactys. It has a clear message and is well presented.
Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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I'll take your hand, Carol and lets expand our boundaries. Mind you, I love your tetactys. It has a clear message and is well presented.
Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Jada
My dear friend, you have already expanded my boundaries time and time again. With your written words and your precious friendship, my horizons never cease...Thank you...Smiles, Carol
Comment from c_lucas
Working together without a selfish thought is a good way to improve our world. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Working together without a selfish thought is a good way to improve our world. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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Charlie
Glad you like the poem. I am always relieved when I get a review and they understood what I was attempting to say. Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome, Carol. Charlie
Comment from JudithMarie
You say a lot in few words. Walking together gives the power we need to go beyond ourselves. You said it beautifully. I like the artwork you chose also. Wish you the best in the contest. JudithMarie
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You say a lot in few words. Walking together gives the power we need to go beyond ourselves. You said it beautifully. I like the artwork you chose also. Wish you the best in the contest. JudithMarie
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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JudithMarie
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my poem. I really appreciate your comments. Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Carol, This is a nice tetracty poem. It speaks of the bonding of two minds to cause each of them to expand their boundaries. It is one way of saying two minds are better than one. At least that is what I make of it. I like the picture you used. It could be the bonding of two from different cultures or philosophies.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Carol, This is a nice tetracty poem. It speaks of the bonding of two minds to cause each of them to expand their boundaries. It is one way of saying two minds are better than one. At least that is what I make of it. I like the picture you used. It could be the bonding of two from different cultures or philosophies.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
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BEth
You fully undertood the meaning of the poem and have made me very happy and relieved. I never know if I express myself properly in these poems...The thought is in my head but I wonder if it relates in the poem. Glad you understood and enjoyed. Smiles, Carol
Comment from L.lora
Nicely stated, a wonderful
invitation. Excellent easy
to read, flows nicely and I
especially like the sentiments.
Good luck in the contest. Lora
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Nicely stated, a wonderful
invitation. Excellent easy
to read, flows nicely and I
especially like the sentiments.
Good luck in the contest. Lora
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Lora
These poetry things always make me shiver, not knowing exactly what it should or should not be. I don't have the finesse that you do, but I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Smiles, Carol
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Finesse I have-- ROFL, you are so fab... don't ever change Carol. It was very well done and except that!!!! I enjoyed. L
Comment from fictionwriter
In interesting look at a realationship. Expanding boundaries is not something I would have thought about, but it fits nicely. Great job.
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In interesting look at a realationship. Expanding boundaries is not something I would have thought about, but it fits nicely. Great job.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2010
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Joy,
Our world grows with each relationship whether intimate or friendship, I think..At least that's what I was trying to say...but when it comes to poetry...I'm doubtful of how I express myself. Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol