The Writer's Path
Once upon a time I decided to write......39 total reviews
Comment from lola29
Carol, I think you are just warming us up for one of your explosive stories, which I can't wait to read. I love your reference in the story of me, but I must admit, that Melissa is at the top of the food chain in that catagory, and I hope to learn so much from all of you.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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Carol, I think you are just warming us up for one of your explosive stories, which I can't wait to read. I love your reference in the story of me, but I must admit, that Melissa is at the top of the food chain in that catagory, and I hope to learn so much from all of you.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Lola
This was fun..You should join the contest..I had no idea where it was going when I wrote it...Glad you liked it. Carol
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I saw your contest, and it looks very inviting. I hope my muse will come up with something.
Comment from Winslow
Dear Carol,
I rather liked all the beginnings except for the very first one. Once upon a time a lady ate some toad stools and look what that produced.
Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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Dear Carol,
I rather liked all the beginnings except for the very first one. Once upon a time a lady ate some toad stools and look what that produced.
Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Winslow
No toadstools for me...Sometimes people turn into frogs and then I'd have to kiss everyone to find out who the prince was...I'm getting too old for that! Smiles, Carol
Comment from mbroyles2
I think you out did yourself this time.
This was an excellent read.
I found myself glued to the computer waiting to see what interesting paragraph you would come up with next.
The words were tight, and their was even a little suspense to go with it.
Excellent reference to other's work.
Enjoyable read as always.
Michael
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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I think you out did yourself this time.
This was an excellent read.
I found myself glued to the computer waiting to see what interesting paragraph you would come up with next.
The words were tight, and their was even a little suspense to go with it.
Excellent reference to other's work.
Enjoyable read as always.
Michael
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Michael
Thank you. I wasn't even sure where this story was going until I was deep into it and it was there. Thank you so much for your kind review. Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Carol,
Once Upon A Time ( in fact just today).
I read a great short story writer's rant about other Fanstory writings of fantasy, erotic scenes,sci-fi and etc.
So did I enjoy her entry Yes, I did.
Good luck. Carol with your contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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Hi Carol,
Once Upon A Time ( in fact just today).
I read a great short story writer's rant about other Fanstory writings of fantasy, erotic scenes,sci-fi and etc.
So did I enjoy her entry Yes, I did.
Good luck. Carol with your contest.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Gert
Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I truly apprecite it. Carol
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you are welcome Carol
Gert
Comment from mermaids
This is a great read. You covered all the bases here. I recently entered a contest and my computer crashed, so I lost the story and missed the deadline. Maybe a detective
western fantasy erotic story is in the works for you. Happy New Year. Elaine
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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This is a great read. You covered all the bases here. I recently entered a contest and my computer crashed, so I lost the story and missed the deadline. Maybe a detective
western fantasy erotic story is in the works for you. Happy New Year. Elaine
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Elaine
Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my silly story. I appreciate the comments. Carol
Comment from MizKat
Begin Again - Well, I must say your story held my interest as I was trying to figure out where it was going and how it would end. You seem to know a lot of the members here. I'll bet they'll be pleased to see their names in print by you. It was kinda whacky and silly, but good. Kat
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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Begin Again - Well, I must say your story held my interest as I was trying to figure out where it was going and how it would end. You seem to know a lot of the members here. I'll bet they'll be pleased to see their names in print by you. It was kinda whacky and silly, but good. Kat
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Kat
Wacky and silly was what I was going for so I guess I did my job. Thanks for the great review. Carol
Comment from Sasha
I really got a kick out of this one. I love what I call fascinating babbling sanity. You have done a marvelous job with this and had me laughing all the way through. I think this is a great entry for the contest and as I always say, I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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I really got a kick out of this one. I love what I call fascinating babbling sanity. You have done a marvelous job with this and had me laughing all the way through. I think this is a great entry for the contest and as I always say, I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Sash
I think I lost part of my sanity with these new muses but it was great fun. Thanks so much. Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
I've got some ideas about time loops that keep you forever in High School. I loved this rant. You'll just have to hope one of those muses that's filling your house will just have to come up with something. Well done.
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I've got some ideas about time loops that keep you forever in High School. I loved this rant. You'll just have to hope one of those muses that's filling your house will just have to come up with something. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Joy
Thanks for reading and enjoying my silliness. Just a little wacky today I guess. Smiles, Carol
Comment from FredCollingwood
I loved this even before I got to the best part, two-thirds of the way through. Great write. Minor stuff fo you to consider:
Four words and they clicked their mouse as if a cat (was) chasing it > To be perfectly correct "were" is proper with subjunctive mode.
presto - they're gone. > the em dash is two dashes--no spaces.
All right, don't get your thong twisted in a knot. > ahahah! I love this!
(Brooke and Margaret are leaving?)
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I loved this even before I got to the best part, two-thirds of the way through. Great write. Minor stuff fo you to consider:
Four words and they clicked their mouse as if a cat (was) chasing it > To be perfectly correct "were" is proper with subjunctive mode.
presto - they're gone. > the em dash is two dashes--no spaces.
All right, don't get your thong twisted in a knot. > ahahah! I love this!
(Brooke and Margaret are leaving?)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my wacky story. I appreciate your assistance and shall finx those errors. Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Carol, I love your new muses. They are so witty and I think with the team you have on hand, you could write well on any subject and any genre: humor, supernatural, western, purple prose, drama, or whatever else. Good luck through 2010. I'm still looking for a good muse if any of yours decide your writing room is too crowded.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
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Carol, I love your new muses. They are so witty and I think with the team you have on hand, you could write well on any subject and any genre: humor, supernatural, western, purple prose, drama, or whatever else. Good luck through 2010. I'm still looking for a good muse if any of yours decide your writing room is too crowded.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Beth
Thanks so much for enjoying my wacky writing today...I never know what direction they'll have me going...Guess that's good....keeps life interesting. Smiles, Carol