POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from melyuki
Hi Sis, this rather sad poem, is filled totally with passion and emotion. The chill of the mother's cries, the word "goodbye". All so finalising, and daunting. And the comparison of ' sweet warmth ' just accentuates the feelings throughout the lines. well done and extrememly powerful words. Hugs to my big sis, luv little sis.
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Hi Sis, this rather sad poem, is filled totally with passion and emotion. The chill of the mother's cries, the word "goodbye". All so finalising, and daunting. And the comparison of ' sweet warmth ' just accentuates the feelings throughout the lines. well done and extrememly powerful words. Hugs to my big sis, luv little sis.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Sis
My little boy was touching my heart while I sat up late New Year's Eve....thus the poem exploded out of me and here it is...Thanks for understanding the love and the pain inside it. Smiles, Sis
Comment from jadapenn
I loved this contest entry. The presentation is well done and the few words convey exactly how a mother feels at the loss of a son as result of war.
Well written. Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
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I loved this contest entry. The presentation is well done and the few words convey exactly how a mother feels at the loss of a son as result of war.
Well written. Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Jada
It was easy to get the emotions for this one and the picture just added a lot of power to the poem. Carol
Comment from anabellapongasi
Hi Carol,
This is a very sad and touching cinquain about a mother who lost a child. I know the feelings are very real to you and the pain still lingers but I also know God is continuing to comfort you and strengthen you. Best wishes in the contest and Happy New Year to you!
Anabella
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Hi Carol,
This is a very sad and touching cinquain about a mother who lost a child. I know the feelings are very real to you and the pain still lingers but I also know God is continuing to comfort you and strengthen you. Best wishes in the contest and Happy New Year to you!
Anabella
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Anabella
Thank you for understanding and knowing the feelings behind the poem. Appreciate the review. My best to you, Carol
Comment from misscookie
This is a beauitful picture and so is your poem
I sense the warmth in every word you write
I feel the love and compassion especial in the last two lines
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This is a beauitful picture and so is your poem
I sense the warmth in every word you write
I feel the love and compassion especial in the last two lines
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Cookie
Thank you for understanding the pain and love within these words...Carol
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Your more than welcome my friend have a blessed day or night
Comment from L.lora
Carole, this is phenomenal,
so poignant and sad yet leaving
us with a message to ponder.
Very well crafted, a superb
write. no nits or spags.
Good luck. Lora
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Carole, this is phenomenal,
so poignant and sad yet leaving
us with a message to ponder.
Very well crafted, a superb
write. no nits or spags.
Good luck. Lora
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Lora
Thank you so much for reading and understanding the pain in this poem. Smiles, Carol
Comment from psyexmachina
This poem is wrenching in its spare intensity. You have succeeded in capturing the essence of grief and longing. Thank you for the powerful message.
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This poem is wrenching in its spare intensity. You have succeeded in capturing the essence of grief and longing. Thank you for the powerful message.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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psyexmachina
Thank you for reading and understanding the pain within the words..Smiles, Carol
Comment from IndianaIrish
Wow, Carol. What a moving poem. The loss of a child ... from a baby to an adult ... will always cause a mother to be forever asking why. There's never an answer, but you just can't help to ask to know the reason.
Indy :>)
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Wow, Carol. What a moving poem. The loss of a child ... from a baby to an adult ... will always cause a mother to be forever asking why. There's never an answer, but you just can't help to ask to know the reason.
Indy :>)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Karyn
Sometimes it's so crystal clear and then other times I can't begin to understand...Smiles, Carol
Comment from Realist101
Hi again, Carol, this has MUCH meaning, for so little words, they speak volumes...an end to war, a mother's loss. Very good, and the picture is perfect too. Your friend, Susan
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Hi again, Carol, this has MUCH meaning, for so little words, they speak volumes...an end to war, a mother's loss. Very good, and the picture is perfect too. Your friend, Susan
Comment Written 02-Jan-2010
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Susan
Thank you for understanding the pain within the words...Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jean Lutz
Your words and your About Begin Again cut to the heart of this mother and grandmother. I try each day to grow closer to the Lord, yet wonder if I could stand the heartbreak of losing a family member. May this coming year bring you many blessings.
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Your words and your About Begin Again cut to the heart of this mother and grandmother. I try each day to grow closer to the Lord, yet wonder if I could stand the heartbreak of losing a family member. May this coming year bring you many blessings.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2010
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Jean
Thank you for your understanding review. I appreciate your thoughts. Smiles, Carol
Comment from HalfHoff
Wow --- jeepers and BIG Gulp. I still have a lump in my throat. Really gripping and very important write. Wow, again. Superb entry. Lea Ann
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Wow --- jeepers and BIG Gulp. I still have a lump in my throat. Really gripping and very important write. Wow, again. Superb entry. Lea Ann
Comment Written 01-Jan-2010
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LeaAnn
Thanks for understanding the pain within the lines and appreciating the emotions behind the poem. Smiles, Carol