Comment from royowen

Excellent

Ah yes, the Paraclete, He who accompanies His children, through their natural lives. A beautifully written, poetic song. Just one stanza of 9888 and aabb rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019

Thank you so much, Roy. I appreciate you writing a review for this poem and hope you enjoy my others equally.

reply by royowen on 02-Aug-2019

Well done

Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson

Excellent

I don't know how the other poem sound but this one is on point
your words are so simple for anyone to understand that is how you captured my attention from the start and your words torched my heart
thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019

Thank you so much for your encouraging comments. These words have to be simple for me to understand, too!

reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 02-Aug-2019

Until next time.
Cookie

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

I give you a 5 for content and desire to share your heart. A picture to go with this would be most helpful. Keep writing your heart and sharing God's love, Buck

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 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thank you for pointing this out to me, but a picture would really enhance the poem. A very good idea I would like to follow through on.

Comment from Lynn D.

Excellent

Hi Sarah,
I like this poem. It has a good rhythm, and flows together nicely. I really like how you incorporate God into many of your poems. It's inspiring.
-Lynn D.

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 Comment Written 01-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2009

Thank you so much, I really appreciate your wonderful comment about God and His love. With kindness, Sarah